The general welfare of a nation's people is a better indication of that nation's greatness than are the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The best way to indicate a society greatness is an observation of people welfare. The artists, rulers, and scientists' achievements are important too, but general comfort is the most important way to measure a nation's greatness.
There is no point of making expensive movies and awarding artists when people are hungry. Imagine a poor country like India where people do not have jobs and money to make a good lifes for themselves. On the other hand rich super stars wear their expensive clothes to go to Bollywood. This nation needs to put the people first to make a good environment for the country. Instead of spending money to make movies, the goverment can help poor and low-income people who barely have money to have normal meals.
Additionally, rulers usually sacrifise many things for their achievements which is not fair. Imagine a poor family who has been forced to send their sons to the army to fight against their enemy. There is no actual nation's achievement when many families loose their sons to defend the country. On the other hand, many families may loose their jobs and money during war which is not fair. Moreover, rulers can try other ways such as talking to solve dissagrements between countries. A war is not a good way for problems' solution.
On the contrary, scientists' achievements are indication of a nation's welfare; however, the goal should be toward people's comfort. For example, all expensive researches to innovate Covid vaccine are indication of a nation greatness.
There are many ways to measure a country's greatness such as scientists, artists, or rulers achievements. However, there is no actual happiness when general people are poor with no good jobs availability.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
... is the most important way to measure a nations greatness. There is no point of makin...
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Line 2, column 508, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...barely have money to have normal meals. Additionally, rulers usually sacrifise m...
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...against their enemy. There is no actual nations achievement when many families loose th...
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Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
... nations achievement when many families loose their sons to defend the country. On th...
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Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...y. On the other hand, many families may loose their jobs and money during war which i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e are indication of a nation greatness. There are many ways to measure a country...
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Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'jobs'' or 'job's'?
Suggestion: jobs'; job's
...en general people are poor with no good jobs availability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 33.0505617978 24% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 283.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03533568905 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7369903422 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515901060071 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.0720744514 60.3974514979 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.8235294118 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187049180084 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638005816282 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047990721678 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117133337994 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432117704434 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.