The general welfare of a nation's people is a better indication of that nation's greatness than are the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position
The best way to indicate a society greatness is an observation of people welfare. The artists, rulers, and scientists' achievements are important too, but general comfort is the most important way to measure a nation's greatness.
There is no point of making expensive movies and awarding artists when people are hungry. Imagine a poor country like India where people do not have jobs and money to make a good lives for themselves. On the other hand rich super stars wear their expensive clothes to go to Bollywood. This nation needs to put the people first to make a good environment for the country. Instead of spending money to make movies, the goverment can help poor and low-income families who barely have money to have normal meals.
Additionally, rulers usually sacrifise many things for their achievements which is not fair. Imagine a poor family who has been forced to send their sons to the army to fight against their enemy. There is no actual nation's achievement when many families loose their sons to defend the country. On the other hand, many families may loose their jobs and money during war which is not fair. Moreover, rulers can try other ways such as talking to solve dissagrements between countries. A war is not a good way for problems' solution because it costs a lot.
On the contrary, scientists' achievements are indication of a nation's welfare; however, the goal should be toward people's comfort. For example, all expensive researches to innovate Covid vaccine and to offer free vaccine to prevent people's death are indication of a nation greatness that can be a good improvement for any country.
Greatness definition can be different for everyone, but an actual improvement in any country depends on how a government make a society a comfortable environment for every one. There are many ways to measure a country's greatness such as scientists, artists, or rulers achievements. However, there is no actual happiness when general people are poor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
... is the most important way to measure a nations greatness. There is no point of makin...
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Line 2, column 510, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...barely have money to have normal meals. Additionally, rulers usually sacrifise m...
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...against their enemy. There is no actual nations achievement when many families loose th...
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Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
... nations achievement when many families loose their sons to defend the country. On th...
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Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...y. On the other hand, many families may loose their jobs and money during war which i...
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... be a good improvement for any country. Greatness definition can be different fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 329.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00911854103 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76370528571 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504559270517 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8666330288 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.5555555556 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2777777778 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16894717226 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601461604375 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489680614616 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106256215788 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448032332811 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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