Government must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive, because it is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
This is a sensitive issue as the author considers the major cities to be the one who preserves the culture. There are many issues to be addressed in the statement. The first question is whether the actual cultural development takes place in cities or in villages. The next query if the financial support should only be provided for keeping the nation's traditions or for the whole round development of the society. I partially agree with the author. I thimk, along with cities , villages should also be given the funds to keep the cultural foundation and to develop them.
Generally cities which, no doubt, has the national culture. But with the coming of people from different country , the culture got mixed or sometimes , get eroded leading to the loss of originality or purity of our ethics. On the contrary, villages with less influx of people from outside keeps the conventions alive with purity. For instance , India is a country well known for its year old culture,. here most of the people in major cities follow the western tradition that is far different from our tradition. whereas in villages people still follow the prejudices of indian culture as bucolic people are not influenced with the outside world too much.
Secondly, cities are known more for their advancement in every field and neglecting the old tradition most of the time. generation and preservation is tough for cities. Therefore country should think more about investing in a place where culture is still alive and followed by most of the people i.e village.
Praising the fact that cultural development and preservation occurs only in village i would not neglect the fact that major cities hold a lot of festival showing indian traditions at global level but many a times the development happens till the festival gets over, after that people follow their quotidian routine and often shun it.
Concludingly I would say that villages and cities should be given equal finances for the development. More than that cultural development ahould be encouraged in cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, no doubt, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 339.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03539823009 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60245196873 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52802359882 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4489462029 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8333333333 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192583325833 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653569977652 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051402275118 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11303169227 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343261569832 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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