Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive, because it is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
A nation's culture and traditions are preserved across all cities. Each city has his own culture or traditions. Specially if we discuss in respect to india, a person will find different language,food and their dress as he go from one state to other. we can not biasly select some cities to preserve or generate our traditions. government must ensure that it provides financial support to all the cities .
we will come across many small towns or villages where the people have different life style. it can be seen in the way the dress, communicate and their food. The good example for this claim is rajasthan tourism in india.There are many travellers who visit regularly rajasthan to experience different culture and traditions. All the tourist enjoy the food, music, arts of the great old culture of rajasthan. it contributes heavily in the economy of the state.If government will not provide funds to these small villages , the complete tourism will impact.
A country is known by its cities which provides different experiences to a traveller.If authority will provide funds to only major cities, a person will not be able to see all the experience many cities can provide. In order to expand our culture to spread the traditions authorities has to provide all the facilities to all the cities or villages. There should be proper transport options for all the people. All the food, culture ,music should promoted globally so that people will be more interested to experience it and enjoy it.
As per above examples and explanations we can strictly dent the claim given here. A government should properly identify all the cities which will correctly show their culture , traditions instead of just focus their financial help on the major cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 58.6224719101 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 290.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04827586207 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7065986918 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541379310345 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.045813775 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 5.21951772744 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226688824178 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918749749927 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100274971525 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163852172688 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950098557346 0.0667264976115 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.