Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.
I fundamentally agree that government should focus on solving the immediate problem but at the
same time to make efforts to be prepare to solve the future issues.but they should focus more on
solving the todays occurring problem then to identify the causes that will result for the problems to
occur. That doesnt mean that future problems to be neglected it differs from situation to situation to
focus on.
Todays severe problem which to be solved immediately is the rape.it should aware the society
about what is happening in the world at various places with the female society.if the people and the
present generation is aware then the new coming generation will be aware about what is wrong and
write and at the far extend the males of the society will understand. The government should aware
the society by organizing various programs ,by giving serious punishment tom the criminals such
that the another person will never even think to repeat such kind to crime.
Also the defense problem should require the immediate action .when there is the War like
condition they and their family members should be provided with proper security treatment.when if
the war occur the officers who are injured should be provided with extreme care and immediate
treatment and shifted to the safe place where they will be provided with efficient treatment.
Future problems which requires the immediate attention is 2-3 rd of the population is below poverty
line due to unemployment,not educated.if they are unemployed they’ll not be able to provide their
generation with the proper education facilities.Due to this their children will not be properly
educated and the unemployment rate increases.so government should increase the employment
rate,build a proper and free education system for such type of students whose parents annual
income is low.this wouls result in increasing the development of our country .this is the first step for
India will become developed country from developing country.
Thus,government should focus on immediate problem as well the tom solve the causes that would
result in upcoming future problems.Both should be given equal attention for the development and
for the government tom exist i the society.To form the efficient and reliable system todays issues
and upcoming should be solved.
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| 2020-01-19 | jason123 | 50 | view |
| 2020-01-18 | Himanshu Sharma | 66 | view |
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| 2019-12-26 | tg763622253 | 58 | view |
| 2019-12-06 | sudesh tiwari | 58 | view |
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 66
- Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future. 50
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 50
- Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future. 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1992.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 371.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3692722372 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7675076639 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509433962264 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 23.0359550562 230% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 158.206400964 60.3974514979 262% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 284.571428571 118.986275619 239% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.0 23.4991977007 226% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.97078651685 503% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295455173323 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166421518149 0.0831039109588 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134208689492 0.0758088955206 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994449963958 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134218330687 0.0667264976115 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.4 14.1392134831 215% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 48.8420337079 36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 12.1743820225 197% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.38706741573 121% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 11.2143820225 207% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 11.7820224719 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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