The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
In a way it is the good way but it is not the best way to prepare the generation for leadership in all the fields with cooperation rather than competition.In some fields competition matters more than cooperation,whether in some fields both matters equally and in some cooperation it depends upon the situation.
In education fields competition plays an important role, if students will compete with each other it would result in better result, growth of the student.Due to competition in various companies they improve their product continuously and in a better way giving best services to the customer.Like for example Amazon,Flip-kart etc.
Due to competition Amazon is providing better services ,good discount offers,timely delivery of products,exchange policies in order to, stay in market.
But in government or industries coordination between the parties or workers matters more if they will compete they will produce worst outcome.In political parties all the members of the parties should work hand in hand to survive and help the common people.In industries it all matters the same.For example the Company Apple which is at the top position but it has not secure the best position due to only one worker but due to many employees who worked day and night and coordinated and cooperated
and cooperated with each other.
In sum we should train the upcoming generation with both cooperation and competition in order to survive in the society in future.Both should be present in them neither only competition nor only cooperation will make them best to survive or secure a specific position in society.
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 50
- Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future. 50
- Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future. 50
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ith cooperation rather than competition.In some fields competition matters more th...
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...eration rather than competition.In some fields competition matters more than cooperati...
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...ompetition matters more than cooperation,whether in some fields both matters equally and...
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...tion it depends upon the situation. In education fields competition plays an i...
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...in better result, growth of the student.Due to competition in various companies the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 259.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15637951187 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505791505792 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 704.065955056 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 23.0359550562 221% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.464326832 60.3974514979 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 273.8 118.986275619 230% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.8 23.4991977007 220% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180196098636 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936693302815 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822898673046 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860585839975 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772863817909 0.0667264976115 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.4 14.1392134831 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 48.8420337079 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 12.1743820225 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.29 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 11.8971910112 265% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 11.2143820225 200% => OK
text_standard: 23.0 11.7820224719 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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