Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
Government have responsibility of maintaining a peace with other countries and safeguard the nation as well as encouraging an art which plays important role in society. Government should invest in arts as well as in military according to its requirement.
For nation, to sustain require a society of talented people from various background such as scientist, Writer, Poet, Singer. Overall development of nation can be achieved by investing in it. The investment required might be different and depends upon priorities for government. Art is an integral part of society which nourishes human's capacity of thinking and helps in developing a vibrant nation. In many countries, investment of art goes in development of cultural center, encouraging artist by giving scholarships and awards.
There are some countries in which their culture is dying because, they invested very less in art. Some countries are investing to prevent a local language from dying. For example, Hebrew language was moribund, after investment of government in art, it got rejuvenated.
The money required for research and development for military equipment is much larger than the money required for encouraging arts. for example, investment required for development of military aircraft goes in billion dollars. On the other hand, arts can be encouraged by
In summary, Government should invest in art as well as in military according to its requirement. Nation require a
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...ry according to its requirement. Nation require a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, for example, in summary, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 33.0505617978 18% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 225.0 442.535393258 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47111111111 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04484993245 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 215.323595506 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546666666667 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 704.065955056 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0267415774 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9285714286 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0714285714 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271760144816 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105915209473 0.0831039109588 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925029579149 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180361735003 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075544121229 0.0667264976115 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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