Recent incursions by deep-sea fishermen into the habitat of the Madagascan shrimp have led to a significant reduction in the species population. With the breeding season fast approaching, the number of shrimp should soon begin to increase. Nonetheless, the population should not return to the levels before the fishing boats arrived. Because this trend is expected to continue over the next several years, the Madagascan shrimp will quickly become an endangered species.
It is very discouraging to see author considering fishermen to be responsible for reduction in the species solely. He is not taking other factor in consideration such as industrial waste, climate change.
Most of the madagascan shrimp found in deep sea is exaggerated statement. They can be found in river, lake and can be cultivated for breeding to increase population. So, they will be become endangered species is completely hoax.
The major reason for the significant reduction in madagascan shrimp is considered as incursion in deep sea by fishermen but, have author considered other factors such as Oil spillage and climate change in his study.The recent decrease in shrimp might due to oil spillage which happens oftenly in deep sea. We have seen reduction of sea species due to climate change which increases temprature of water which makes inhabitual for deep sea species.
The population of shrimp will not return to same level after the breeding season is another controversial statement by author. what if most of shrimp lay their eggs in shallow sea and after hatching of thier eggs they travel to deep sea with this they come to same population as earlier, author should have wrote about where they lay eggs in deep sea or shallow sea.
I disagree completely with author to consider fishermen solely
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'hoaxed'.
Suggestion: hoaxed
...become endangered species is completely hoax. The major reason for the significan...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'authored'.
Suggestion: authored
...sion in deep sea by fishermen but, have author considered other factors such as Oil sp...
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Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...pillage and climate change in his study.The recent decrease in shrimp might due to ...
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Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
...ther controversial statement by author. what if most of shrimp lay their eggs in sha...
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Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the shrimp') or simply say ''most shrimp''.
Suggestion: most of the shrimp; most shrimp
...troversial statement by author. what if most of shrimp lay their eggs in shallow sea and after...
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Line 7, column 308, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'written'.
Suggestion: written
...pulation as earlier, author should have wrote about where they lay eggs in deep sea o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 28.8173652695 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 55.5748502994 61% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 2260.96107784 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 218.0 441.139720559 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08256880734 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.56307096286 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75612882631 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 204.123752495 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52752293578 0.468620217663 113% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 705.55239521 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 19.7664670659 51% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.5898165555 57.8364921388 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.8 119.503703932 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 23.324526521 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.70786347227 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300429093227 0.218282227539 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110328169574 0.0743258471296 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763183088513 0.0701772020484 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141708625409 0.128457276422 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07240141915 0.0628817314937 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.3799401198 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 98.500998004 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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