Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
The issue of budget allocation for development of a nation is complex. art has the ability to change social norms and educate people. many developed nations focus on investing and promoting art. However, I disagree with the statement that Governments should invest as much in the arts as military because it doesn't take account for the current state of any nation.
first, any nation should try to provide the basic facility to its own population. if there is major security threat to nation by any actor like terrorist or neighbouring country, then it should focus on eliminating those issues first. spending on defense system or army is one of the way, nation can enhance its security. Rather than focusing on art, nation should prioritise security because nation might not exist if these threats are not removed or mitigated.
Moreover, spending more on military can be helpful in many ways. if nation has widespread unemployment, then it can use the military as generating employment. many countries have successfully done this. also, military can use extra money provided by goverment to educate its soldiers in many technology.
In addition to, major part of military spending or budget is the cost of weapons. if nation doesn't have capacity to produce weapons then it has to import from other nations which become expensive. So, solely comparing number between military spending and art spending is not useful. we can spend less on art and even get more good result.
we can also use some part of military spending in promoting art within army.
In conclusion, without taking the current state of the nation in consideration, comparison between art and military investment is worth less.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, as to, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 279.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14336917563 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67678352245 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573476702509 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.208725069 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.7222222222 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38888888889 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15219794349 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535072639279 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678105924817 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888903451944 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763060894969 0.0667264976115 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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