Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
Governments are the governing body of the country which looks after the important decisions for the welfare of the nation. Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military is a contradictory statement.
The military of any country comprises of any huge man force army, tanks, warships, nuclear weapons, etc which is very costly. The major purpose of the military is of nation security from other hostile country. However art is the field which is used as hobby by the humans for their entertainment. Arts is a vast field which includes literature, songs, poetry, paintings, etc.
In the well secured nation people can live in peace and harmony. Attacks on Kuwait by Iran in late nineties show that due to low military power how Kuwait got defeated and the whole nation was under siege. Many local people were killed and looted by Iran's army. This shows how important it is to have a strong military force. For having a strong military, nation should spend money for it. Besides art is just a lucrative need of a society. It will be very fatal mistake for any government to invest same amount of money as in military services.Besides the cost for developing arts wiz art galleries, theaters etc are very low as compared with military expenditures.The strength of military can make the county's name prestigious on the world map.
Therefore, governments cant afford to spend such huge amount of money for entertainment purpose. Art is also one of the important part of human life but, from government point of view nation's security should be the first priority.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'therefore', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.284789644013 0.240241500013 119% => OK
Verbs: 0.129449838188 0.157235817809 82% => OK
Adjectives: 0.126213592233 0.0880659088768 143% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0226537216828 0.0497285424764 46% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0161812297735 0.0444667217837 36% => OK
Prepositions: 0.142394822006 0.12292977631 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0291262135922 0.0406280797675 72% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83640840149 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0129449838188 0.030933414821 42% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0938511326861 0.0997080785238 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0194174757282 0.0249443105267 78% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0194174757282 0.0148568991511 131% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1611.0 2732.02544248 59% => OK
No of words: 270.0 452.878318584 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96666666667 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.58838876751 88% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.337037037037 0.366273622748 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.240740740741 0.280924506359 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.188888888889 0.200843997647 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111111111111 0.132149295362 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83640840149 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 219.290929204 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.48968727796 117% => OK
Word variations: 59.2281043792 55.4138127331 107% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6194690265 73% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.380412469 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8469077643 59.4972553346 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.4 141.124799967 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.380412469 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.674092028746 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.21349557522 173% => OK
Readability: 42.0740740741 51.4728631049 82% => OK
Elegance: 2.71153846154 1.64882698954 164% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439543038659 0.391690518653 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118538931416 0.123202303941 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.078376712621 0.077325440228 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.511989968603 0.547984918172 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.188348586945 0.149214159877 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166881746756 0.161403998019 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.212618975811 0.0892212321368 238% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.341266015571 0.385218514788 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0714860100174 0.0692045440612 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319528418677 0.275328986314 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.218727701289 0.0653680567796 335% => Less connections among paragraphs
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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