The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or any other fields is by instilling in them a sense of co operation and not competition
Leader is the person who guides the team and help them achieve goals. The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or any other fields is by instilling in them a sense of co operation and not competition is not sufficient. Many other qualities along with good sense of cooperation are required.
For the development of nation, industry or any other organization the leader plays an very important role. Leader is the part of the team who monitors the work done by the team and help them in achieving their goals. For producing good leaders it is important that from the very young age the children’s must be imbibed with the values like team spirit, co ordination among group etc . However, the argument focus only on sense of co operation is not only sufficient for the perrson to be a good leader. It may stand a chance that person with good co operation skills may not be able to convince his ideas to large group of people as good leader does.
Co operation is having coherency in the team . For the smooth functioning of the team, sense of co operation among its members must be present. Furthermore, having healthy competition enhances the productivity rate of the work .It gives the novice leaders to learn more about how the job is to be done. The competition also helps the leaders to understand the flaws in his ideas and to avoid same mistakes in the future. present. Therefore having competitions is also as important as the sense of cooperation.
The best way to prepare youth for leadership is having healthy competition among themselves along with instilling them a sense of co operation.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'however', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.277070063694 0.240241500013 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.146496815287 0.157235817809 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0923566878981 0.0880659088768 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0445859872611 0.0497285424764 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0382165605096 0.0444667217837 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136942675159 0.12292977631 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0382165605096 0.0406280797675 94% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75535151116 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0286624203822 0.030933414821 93% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.111464968153 0.0997080785238 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0127388535032 0.0249443105267 51% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00955414012739 0.0148568991511 64% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1679.0 2732.02544248 61% => OK
No of words: 290.0 452.878318584 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78965517241 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.58838876751 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.293103448276 0.366273622748 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.220689655172 0.280924506359 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.165517241379 0.200843997647 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.134482758621 0.132149295362 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75535151116 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 219.290929204 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462068965517 0.48968727796 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.4143249676 55.4138127331 80% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6194690265 73% => OK
Sentence length: 19.3333333333 23.380412469 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3250443487 59.4972553346 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.933333333 141.124799967 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 23.380412469 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.533333333333 0.674092028746 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.21349557522 269% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.4022988506 51.4728631049 80% => OK
Elegance: 1.97222222222 1.64882698954 120% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.556778674469 0.391690518653 142% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.132057215812 0.123202303941 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0769806754167 0.077325440228 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.562630933393 0.547984918172 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.202165471485 0.149214159877 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.229115716329 0.161403998019 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.2143753377 0.0892212321368 240% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.47742415261 0.385218514788 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0924964228786 0.0692045440612 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.449787964319 0.275328986314 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.178607031852 0.0653680567796 273% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.