Governments should not fund any scientific research whose consequences are unclear.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing

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Any research involves a lot of factors l...
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...like sufficient amount of capable people,good amount of knowledge,proper resources an...
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... capable people,good amount of knowledge,proper resources and mainly sufficient funding...
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...resources and mainly sufficient funding.Sufficient funding is necessary for proper researc...
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... necessary for proper research to go on.However some may argue that government should f...
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... necessary for proper research to go on.However some may argue that government should f...
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...those projects which have clear outcomes ,whereas some may tell government should ...
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...ll projects and must encourage research.If Government fund on research based on c...
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...ll projects and must encourage research.If Government fund on research based on c...
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...rch.If Government fund on research based on consequences of the result then there...
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... then there will be lot of problems. If government does not funds projects wh...
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...f problems. If government does not funds projects whose consequences are unclear...
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...f problems. If government does not funds projects whose consequences are unclear...
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...ch among the scientist and other people.There will be not much research as some resea...
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...lves cannot afford to fund such projects,this is why government funding is necessary....
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Suggestion: But
... is why government funding is necessary.But when the government do not fund such pr...
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...the government do not fund such projects ,then no scientist will dare to do resear...
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...l dare to do research or try new things.This will hinder the progress of country whi...
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...ountry which will be very dangerous. Many projects have unclear consequences....
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...Many projects have unclear consequences.For example consider India's mission t...
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...r India's mission to Mars which was called mission mangalyan.When the missio...
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...ars which was called mission mangalyan.When the mission was designed and planned ,t...
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...hen the mission was designed and planned ,there were some consequences which were ...
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...,there were some consequences which were not clear like whether the mission will ...
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Suggestion: But
...ission will be successful or not and so.But the government encouraged scientist to ...
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...mplementing and sending there rocket to mars in first attempt. Like this,there are m...
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...cket to mars in first attempt. Like this,there are many cases in which consequences of...
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...onsequences of the results are not clear but this does not mean that government s...
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...rnment should not fund in such projects.Sometimes the result may come as we desire and s...
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...metimes the result may come as we desire and sometimes it may not but if the gove...
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...metimes it may not but if the government don't encourage such things then t...
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...ay not but if the government don't encourage such things then the country m...
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... trying and implementing new things. Though there are some advantages if gov...
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.... Though there are some advantages if government does funding based on con...
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...ntages if government does funding based on consequences of the result like they ...
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...save money spent on unnecessary projects ,save time of the people working under it...
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...e of the people working under it and so.But following such practice depends on situ...
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...n and it may not hold true In all cases.If suppose a country's economy is wea...
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...ufficient amount of money to do research,then in such cases if the government fund th...
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... invest on right projects and save money .If we consider another scenario where co...
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...nvest on right projects and save money .If we consider another scenario where coun...
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...ario where country have good economy and having sufficient amount of funds and he...
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... on consequences may not be logical. In addition to all the points discussed,...
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... In addition to all the points discussed,for a country to grow and prosper it is nec...
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... and motivate people to do more research ,try new things which may have lot of adv...
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...h may have lot of advantages to society.On the other hand if the government do not...
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... so and do funding based on consequences ,it may benefit only countries with wea...
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...do funding based on consequences ,it may benefit only countries with weak econom...
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...equences ,it may benefit only countries with weak economies and not to all count...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, then, whereas, for example, in addition, in all cases, with respect to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2513.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 482.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21369294606 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04554210263 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.400414937759 0.4932671777 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 747.0 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 80.0 23.0359550562 347% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.618391508 60.3974514979 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 418.833333333 118.986275619 352% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 80.3333333333 23.4991977007 342% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.5 5.21951772744 393% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 49.0 7.80617977528 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178202605003 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113148003198 0.0831039109588 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374672626522 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123850435753 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379863875967 0.0667264976115 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 43.3 14.1392134831 306% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.26 48.8420337079 -3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.3 12.1743820225 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.38706741573 124% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.8971910112 244% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.0 11.2143820225 303% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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