University education is the most important thing in the modern world. Governments have different policies to grant scholarships and free education. The recommended policy is contentious because some argue that universities should take a fee and others argue that universities should offer free university education to students who cannot afford the fee. I believe that government should offer free university education to the needy students. There are numerous examples and pieces of evidence that students had benefited from such policy of the government. Ram and Jack’s life stories support the policy.
Ram was a determined guy from a family whose income is below the average and who could not afford the university fee. But in my country, the government had made a policy to give free university education to needy students who are hardworking, talented, and determined towards their studies. Due to this policy, Ram got an opportunity to get a free university education by focusing only on his studies; he did not have any fee torture from the university so he showed perseverance during his university days and later he got a high percentage. By showing his good marks and his dedication to his studies he succeed to get a deserving job; he lifted his family’s economic status. If there was no such policy, he could not focus on his studies and could not get good marks, and due to this reason, he was unable to lift his family’s economic-financial status. This is a good consequence of implementing such a policy.
Jack is another example who got a free university education during his undergraduate. He was a sedulous person in his studies and responsibility but he could not afford the university fee to pursue his dream education. But due to the government’s free education policy, he got free education. During his college days, he did not face any financial crisis so he got an opportunity to focus on research and studies; he invented a solution for traffic management in the city and later his research outcome helped the government to manage traffic problems properly. This was possible only due to the free university education for needy students. So after implementation, there will be many positive consequences.
Some might argue that universities should not offer free universities to any student because the university’s economic status would be weak. This may be true that by providing free education to some needy students, the university cannot raise enough money but the positive consequences of such a policy are incomparable. The life story of Ram and Jack proves that universities should offer free university education to students who cannot afford it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 606, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'succeeds'.
Suggestion: succeeds
...ks and his dedication to his studies he succeed to get a deserving job; he lifted his f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2259.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 438.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15753424658 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0537440775 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.415525114155 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 745.2 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1091733356 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.571428571 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.761904761905 5.21951772744 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302000154552 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122525777711 0.0831039109588 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100021984411 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243778344222 0.150359130593 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100037470612 0.0667264976115 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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