"The intellectual benefits of attending a university or college are vastly overrated: most people could learn more by studying and reading on their own for four years than by pursuing a university or college degree."
There has always been a saying that institutional education may not make a person great rather his own interest of learning can make him stand above all. Institutions like college and university were introduced to have a disciplined way of learning as well as these create another important platform for socialisation.This prompt suggests that an individual can easily gain a lot more knowledge by studying on his own rather than attending any educational instituions.I strongly disagree with this statement and I think that institional education can bring more benefits than self study for two reasons.
To begin, from the establishment of civilisation, the society was designed in a structed way so that people residing in that society can improve their moral and intellectual properties by the gaining knowledge. That’s why educational institutions came into existance. One can easily learn something on their own nowadays with the means of digital platforms such as youtube. Online education has been popular in a while. But still the necessity of going to the college or universities hasnot decreased. This is because in these institutions one gathers knowledge outside their major. Socialising with the mates, learning from the teachers, participating in competitions etc are also essential aspects of education. The only aim of the college or university is not making a graduate, rather it focuses on building a young mind who will soon enter his crucial phase of life after passing out from there. Self study may be effective in gaining knowledge of the books but the social skills can not be achievened with that.
Futher, even if someone manages to know lot better than the institutions teach, how can he expects that only studying at home can make him skilled? Is it possible to be a doctor just by reading books and studying at home? It requires practical knowledge, skilled supervision, mentoring and what not. Likewise, one cannot expect to be an engineer all by himself. It requires well equipped laboratories, hand on experience, guidance to be an engineer. From these perspectives,it is easier to realise the importance of college or university in builidng a professional. Otherwise, it would be something like learning how to ride a bicycle by reading a book.
Of course, some may argue that history depicts great personalities who didn’t attend college but managed to create revolution by their own. It is undeniable that they were gifted but also they had less access to these amenitie which doesnot mean that they are useless. Those who have access to quality education is considered to be a blessing because of its importance. People who disregard this significance may have failed to take account the major aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, may, so, still, well, while, i think, of course, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2310.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 444.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2027027027 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01385352046 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560810810811 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 740.7 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.8616677367 60.3974514979 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22727272727 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22728155925 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557742508469 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621330967318 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135142752972 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519453596424 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 11.8971910112 181% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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