It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or women as a hero.
Hero have two prior meaning, First who plays an role, an acting certain movie. another one who really behave like hero in an day to day life.Their own personality, thier helping nature, have strong impact on society. I Partially disagree with given statement, it is no longer possible for society to regard any man or women as a hero.
hero is position got to men or women on their extraordinary act.Hero is not only person who fought for society, a person who had take lots of effort for completion of study, and then became got some best achievement. so, ideal example for courage to student, how one can neglect. instead giving example, their history will encourage student most.
Let us take an example, of 'chatrapati shivaji maharaj', the hero who fought for indian castle. who have brilliant ideas.from years a ago an chapter also included in indian history book. It's inspiring an student, their mind.
There are various example of peoples, who have done an inspirational activity so that they may called by there department. In Pandemic situation, there is an extremely bad situation
an ambulus driver work as hero, who not felt in his work, continualy work. so an hero, in which ever field, made an long impression so one can't regret their achivement.
Second view, it's says society may not longer possible to regard for men or women as hero. Taking in another view, their are the leader who have done work in real manner after next election he may selected, but has not proficiency of work. so people avoid them and found another leader who will fulfill their need. so in the given example the two leader, society forgot an previous leader who might have done work but unable to fulfill some requirement of society.
Whenever, there is profitable perspect society, will suppose forgot the heroes or leader. so what we called an person do 99 correct and false in 1 case. people never appreciate him for his 99 correct, but an argue for 1 wrong.
To sum up with all, there are two views may take into consideration. hero's is an concept people might be remember for years and years.rather for their sake even they might forgot hero's and accept the upcoming thing which may came in front of them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
Hero have two prior meaning, First who plays an r...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...have two prior meaning, First who plays an role, an acting certain movie. another ...
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Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Another
...plays an role, an acting certain movie. another one who really behave like hero in an d...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ther one who really behave like hero in an day to day life.Their own personality, ...
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Suggestion: Their
... behave like hero in an day to day life.Their own personality, thier helping nature, ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hero
... regard any man or women as a hero. hero is position got to men or women on thei...
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Suggestion: Hero
...men or women on their extraordinary act.Hero is not only person who fought for socie...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...ho fought for society, a person who had take lots of effort for completion of study,...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...ho fought for society, a person who had take lots of effort for completion of study,...
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Suggestion: So
... then became got some best achievement. so, ideal example for courage to student, ...
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Suggestion: Instead
...ourage to student, how one can neglect. instead giving example, their history will enco...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: instead,
...ourage to student, how one can neglect. instead giving example, their history will enco...
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Suggestion: Who
... the hero who fought for indian castle. who have brilliant ideas.from years a ago a...
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Message: “who” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the hero who fought for indian castle. who have brilliant ideas.from years a ago a...
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Line 4, column 130, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...le. who have brilliant ideas.from years a ago an chapter also included in indian ...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...o have brilliant ideas.from years a ago an chapter also included in indian history...
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Line 4, column 185, Rule ID: IT_IS[7]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...r also included in indian history book. Its inspiring an student, their mind. Th...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...d in indian history book. Its inspiring an student, their mind. There are vario...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... not felt in his work, continualy work. so an hero, in which ever field, made an l...
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Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...t felt in his work, continualy work. so an hero, in which ever field, made an long...
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Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
.... so an hero, in which ever field, made an long impression so one cant regret thei...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...r field, made an long impression so one cant regret their achivement. Second view...
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
... women as hero. Taking in another view, their are the leader who have done work in re...
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Suggestion: So
...ected, but has not proficiency of work. so people avoid them and found another lea...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... avoid them and found another leader who will fulfill their need. so in the given...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...er leader who will fulfill their need. so in the given example the two leader, so...
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Line 9, column 371, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... example the two leader, society forgot an previous leader who might have done wor...
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Suggestion: So
...ll suppose forgot the heroes or leader. so what we called an person do 99 correct ...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...the heroes or leader. so what we called an person do 99 correct and false in 1 cas...
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Suggestion: People
...rson do 99 correct and false in 1 case. people never appreciate him for his 99 correct...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... appreciate him for his 99 correct, but an argue for 1 wrong. To sum up with all, the...
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Suggestion: Heros
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...s may take into consideration. heros is an concept people might be remember for ye...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, second, so, then, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 384.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77864583333 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46224612473 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557291666667 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8635444954 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.380952381 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95238095238 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 33.0 7.80617977528 423% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232107577022 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084680776839 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154986509779 0.0758088955206 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108797178977 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913815794204 0.0667264976115 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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