Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The statement presents a view that I would agree is successfull most of the time. It is necessary to make laws flexible enough to places, times, and circumstances situations becauase every situation is different.
It is understandable that laws should make exceptions in cases that are not on purpose to prevent unnecessary punishments. For example, imagine a woman who killed a rapist to defend herself. In such a circumstance, there is no positive outcome to punish the woman because the woman had a right to save her physical and emotional feelings.
Additionally, laws should not make people's lives hard when there is no point of keeping laws. For instance, a woman who got peregnant with a rapist should have a choice to have an abortion or not. There should be laws' flexibility in this situation because it is every woman's right to keep a baby or not no mather what states or places she lives.
On the contrary, some laws should not be felxible in any situation because of terrible consequences that can be permament. Consider a parent who punishes her child physically and emotionally. No mather what is the reason for child punishment, the parent does not have a right to hurt a human being. In such cases, harsh punishments can teach all adults that they can not destroy children characteristics.
In conclusion, it is important to make laws flexible enough to consider different circumstances, times, and places. However, there should be no exceptions when it comes to some specefic situations that can result in permanent damage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 58.6224719101 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 258.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98837209302 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98609893536 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531007751938 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 704.065955056 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4983339708 60.3974514979 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.9285714286 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148368650001 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535826305759 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326755844133 0.0758088955206 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891335650149 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295664987284 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.