Shiv Khera a famous author has once said successful people don't do different things they do things differently. No matter how one achieve his goals in life either with luck or by following work ethic it is very necessary that they do things in a way that no other person can perform. Author have favored chance over hard work and all the efforts one give for achieving success. Can we consider ourselves worthy enough to be praised when we are not doing things in manner its ought to be?
Firstly, there is no one way to define success. Curing patient from illness might define success for doctors whereas, having profit in business could be that for businessman. Passing exam or getting first rank in class both can different aspect of success. However, achieving success by cheating in exam, or curing patient without a medical degree merely follows ethical values. So achieving goals by methods that are not actually based upon values or standards can not be considered success. Thus, it is vital that one follows proper rules and regulations and give all the efforts needed for the particular work.
Constant determination is the key to success. Our work ethics do teach us determination as well. Luck might favor once or twice it's determination and hard work which determines our fate. If enough effort is given than there is no work one cannot perform. Repetitive failures might deviate interest on task and make people wish for luck. For instance if we have seen a bird collecting leaves and other essentials to make it's nest. Nature also mandate some rules or ways for creatures living. The bird just don't destroy or reside in other's nest. Efforts through day and night gives it a home to live. But merely sitting and waiting for some luck to happen so that it can find a place to live is foolishness.
On the contrary, one cannot forget that there are successful people whom our society consider lucky. However, there are are very few people who would give credit solely to luck instead of hardship they went through. Mark Zuckerberg, famous internet magnate, once considered as the richest person in the world, his most appreciated work was previously designed for his college's students profile which gained popularity immediately. Can we consider this luck?? Not exactly, as he was able to continue his work with full dedication. Successful people like Steve Jobs, Nelson Mandela, or any person able to be in Forbes billionaire list would describe their achievement as outcome of hard work and determination not due to some miracle that happened out of nowhere.
Though author claims being lucky is more important but it is not true in real scenario. Until and unless one understands and follows work ethics the idea of being sucessful be it in any field, workplace or home seems to be unjustified. Luck can favor you once but work values gives motivation to continue despite the failures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, thus, well, whereas, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2411.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 494.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88056680162 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52674477957 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 215.323595506 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53036437247 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 755.1 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3824764975 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1379310345 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0344827586 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58620689655 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239047384298 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680450242122 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554022498624 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138304403927 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400239443494 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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