Living in the 21st century, one thing we have realized is: the importance of being in a society where we follow definite rules and order. There is no doubt that this had made our life quite manageable as we don’t have to worry about the circumstances where multiple voices raised would have created chaos amongst us. However lowering our voices or following higher authorities blindly without questioning those makes us think: is it a fair decision we are moving forward with? In my opinion it’s better to shout in the crowd even if no one is listening, than keep moving forward without knowing what is happening in the surrounding.
The first and the foremost point is that its quiet necessary to actively participate in any type of conversation be it in our workplace, home, school at any phase of our life. Active participation here does not mean doing everything that has been given to you. For instance, one working in any organization is very obedient, loyal, and fulfills all the responsibility given in his/ her shoulder. The employer will definitely consider the employee as perfect candidate for the work as he never questions the boss. Sometimes when we follow certain rules and regulations without understanding the weightage it carries within might make it more unfruitful. He should raise the voice if it’s not morally correct or ethically sound. If the decision taken by the authorities somehow has a flaw in it and he has the potential to identify it then it’s definitely his responsibility to question the higher officials. Because it’s not necessary that the rules that has been set or decision taken previously are correct or cannot be modified once again to make it more perfect.
One of the important thing that we shouldn’t forget is questioning the authorities will actually make us challenge the system. Not raising the voices will make us their supporter even if we are not supporting them. Rules of the government offices or private companies can be a great example of our passive support to every rules and regulation they have applied to the system. We are compelled to work accordingly even if we do not like the way they function. Even being a consumer we have rights to speak against system if the goods we consume or buy are not of actual standard they claim to be. In reality people who are on higher level want theirs inferiors to be under them and they try to hide their drawbacks. Nobody want their intellectual to be questioned. Likewise government has made law and order for citizens to follow which must be unbiased. However, there are people who fight against the discrimination people are facing. What if people like Nelson Mandela never raised voices against the system? Was the change possible without his contribution in the history of South Africa? All of us can agree that he stood against the authorities even though many wanted him to keep silent. Decisions passed by the higher authorities does not necessarily have to be correct all the time and there is no harm in standing against their rules.
To the contrary, we also cannot deny the fact that the law and order government that has been set for the citizen are for the benefit of the nation as a whole. The rules made are after years of discussion following many hurdles on the way by team of well experienced, and well knowledge individuals. They must have gone through all the pros and cons of the decisions they are making. Also in private companies owner has the power to make the rules as it’s his investment and his assets on stake. So it’s entirely upon him if he doesnt want to listen the person working under him.
In conclusion, we should follow the rules and regulations that have been predetermined only if they are right. We must question the authorities for the validity of the rules they are making us follow if they are wrong. Even if one has slight doubt regarding the predetermined rules one should definitely raise the queries. It will make a competitive environment which can be healthy and has often been proved to be better for the future of individual, society, organization, and the government.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 723, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'Nobody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...hey try to hide their drawbacks. Nobody want their intellectual to be questioned. Li...
^^^^
Line 3, column 765, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...nt their intellectual to be questioned. Likewise government has made law and order for c...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 529, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... stake. So it’s entirely upon him if he doesnt want to listen the person working under...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...are making us follow if they are wrong. Even if one has slight doubt regarding the pred...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, first, however, if, likewise, regarding, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 41.0 19.5258426966 210% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 84.0 33.0505617978 254% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3435.0 2235.4752809 154% => OK
No of words: 710.0 442.535393258 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83802816901 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.1619594331 4.55969084622 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71017720894 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 322.0 215.323595506 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453521126761 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1093.5 704.065955056 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.2370786517 168% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8969232713 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.029411765 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8823529412 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.20588235294 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126903414966 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339519430574 0.0831039109588 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269493525096 0.0758088955206 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737737761475 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296950401532 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 100.480337079 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 723, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'Nobody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...hey try to hide their drawbacks. Nobody want their intellectual to be questioned. Li...
^^^^
Line 3, column 765, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...nt their intellectual to be questioned. Likewise government has made law and order for c...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 529, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... stake. So it’s entirely upon him if he doesnt want to listen the person working under...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...are making us follow if they are wrong. Even if one has slight doubt regarding the pred...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, first, however, if, likewise, regarding, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 41.0 19.5258426966 210% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 84.0 33.0505617978 254% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3435.0 2235.4752809 154% => OK
No of words: 710.0 442.535393258 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83802816901 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.1619594331 4.55969084622 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71017720894 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 322.0 215.323595506 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453521126761 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1093.5 704.065955056 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.2370786517 168% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8969232713 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.029411765 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8823529412 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.20588235294 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126903414966 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339519430574 0.0831039109588 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269493525096 0.0758088955206 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737737761475 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296950401532 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 100.480337079 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.