The main objective of education is definitely to procure a job as one must be able to make his bread and butter on his own. The education basically helps in building thinking abilities, that is thinking in right direction. It teaches how to apply the knowledge in the real life. It helps to solve the real-life problems that are faced by people.
The main of education is that one should be able to apply the knowledge in daily life and solve the problems faced daily. The education builds thinking abilities and helps in logical thinking. It also helps in critical thinking which is necessary to have a better job. People working in the civil sector need to crack the difficult exams and then they can help people with knowledge and authority.
Various engineers, doctors are very well educated, and they help people in solving the problems by offering help in the form of advanced technology. Advancement in Artificial intelligence is noticeable which is offering help to various businessmen. The doctors can cure various diseases which are new and don't have solution in the past. All these engineers, doctors can offer help to people based on the education they have taken. Besides they are able to make their own bread and butter easily.
Besides it is observed people pursuing streams where research is done in the form of job. They get paid for the contribution they give in the form of research although the research may not be successful. Besides people also invest money in stock market to have exponential economic growth and leave peaceful life.
The main objective of education is not actually to procure a job but is to make bread and butter easily. One should be able make money in any form to live in the way he/she wants to live. It builds the thinking abilities and also may offer help to solve daily life problems. The education helps in applying the knowledge for the betterment of oneself and may be society.
- The following appeared in a note from a sedan owner to a friend Of the two top brands of cars introduced in past year Kia cars are clearly more superior to the competing Alfa cars Kia cars boast aesthetically pleasing design and a fuel economy of 50 kms p 50
- Policies that focuses on protecting environment should not be imposed on multinational organizations as they generate profit and boost the economy even though they cause damage to the environment 50
- The following memorandum is from the manager of Bagel Mania Bakery Recently Bagel Mania replaced sugar with saccharin a sugar substitute throughout its bakeries in the Northeast areas of the USA Contrary to initial expectations this change did not have an 73
- Because of television and worldwide computer connections people can now become familiar with a great many places that they have never visited As a result tourism will soon become obsolete
- Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reasons on which that claim is based CLAIM The value of integrating different disciplines in a curriculum is overestimated in the present times REASON E 50
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...cure various diseases which are new and dont have solution in the past. All these en...
^^^^
Line 5, column 432, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
...based on the education they have taken. Besides they are able to make their own bread a...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e their own bread and butter easily. Besides it is observed people pursuing streams ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
...e their own bread and butter easily. Besides it is observed people pursuing streams ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 205, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
...ugh the research may not be successful. Besides people also invest money in stock marke...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, if, may, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 334.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81137724551 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53142783031 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428143712575 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.1988685069 60.3974514979 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.35 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.65 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220532495856 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797265731445 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146446910466 0.0758088955206 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148569330309 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109151664376 0.0667264976115 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...cure various diseases which are new and dont have solution in the past. All these en...
^^^^
Line 5, column 432, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
...based on the education they have taken. Besides they are able to make their own bread a...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e their own bread and butter easily. Besides it is observed people pursuing streams ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
...e their own bread and butter easily. Besides it is observed people pursuing streams ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 205, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
...ugh the research may not be successful. Besides people also invest money in stock marke...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, if, may, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 334.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81137724551 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53142783031 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428143712575 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.1988685069 60.3974514979 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.35 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.65 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220532495856 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797265731445 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146446910466 0.0758088955206 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148569330309 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109151664376 0.0667264976115 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.