Gender based differences have become ubiquitous components of a society. While it might be true that men and women are not equally suited for some tasks , it is rather going a bit far in stating that in a conclusive way.
Additionally, the reasoning related to physical differences does not take us far too.Men and women are equally capable of most of the tasks if not for all.
This equal suitableness is very much evident in the modern society in which women are almost taking part and competing with men in every task.For instance, in the field of sports, watching women athletes perform is equally entertaining to watch which reinforces the flamboyance of their skill.Many other fields ranging from Fitness training to Politics, Science, Academia,Research and Defence have seen a meteoric growth in female participation in the last few decades.Evidently, it might just the dogma that was prevalent from prehistoric times that women and men are not equally suited which led to the modicum of participation of women in tasks that were considered ill suited. However, in all actuality it can be safely believed that there are no such tasks and fields that women and men are not equally suited.
Having said this, there is other side to the coin that some biological differences between men and women result in women being less stronger than men, nevertheless it is also proved that women are more patient and sedulous in carrying out tasks which require intellectual diligence.These differences may make them suit for different kind of tasks like men for tasks which demand physical effort and women for tasks demanding intellectual effort.However, this is only a theoretical study and empirically this doesn't stand true completely as we can see women performing insanely demanding tasks like hiking and trekking as easily as men can.
Furthermore, these studies stating differences between men and women, although innocuous may lead to gender based discrimination in an rather indirect way in which women are generally not payed equally as men are even though the results are same.Care should be taken in how these go to the public and how they are perceived.
Conclusively, it is not safe to typecast that men and women are suited for different tasks and instead it all depends on the perseverance and grit of an individual, be it woman or man which makes them work out a task with good results.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
...en are not equally suited for some tasks , it is rather going a bit far in stating...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a conclusive way" with adverb for "conclusive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less strong'?
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... theoretical study and empirically this doesnt stand true completely as we can see wom...
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Suggestion: a
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Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, while, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2010.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 399.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03759398496 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.923999829 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 23.0359550562 213% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 220.247446069 60.3974514979 365% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 251.25 118.986275619 211% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.875 23.4991977007 212% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.375 5.21951772744 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237740241775 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118336710753 0.0831039109588 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528110205863 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13847857573 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327699884604 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.2 14.1392134831 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 48.8420337079 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 12.1743820225 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.84 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.38706741573 117% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.6 11.2143820225 193% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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