" Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks. "
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
This reminds me of a meme I recently read which said - "Feminists: Equal rights. Anti-feminist: Equal rights, equal fights". Though meant in a funny way, this depicts one of the essential truth the so-called post-modernistic world looks at in the wrong angle.
I'd classify humans into three categories: Man, woman and transgender.
All three of them are humans, with different physical, emotional and psychological abilities. If they are to be considered equal in all aspects, why was there a need to classify them in the first place?
To the society, men are considered to be stronger, in terms of physique. But considering men superior because of this reason has proven fatal for community development. This view has lead to abortion of countless unborn babies thorughout history.
Coming back to the statement, it is easy to prove it in terms of human adaptability. Humans have the ability to adapt depending on the various vital parameters as perceived by them. Taking a example of a building construction site where the human labour is essential, it is observable that people from both genders employ themselves to work. But over the time, men tends to take up chores which is physically demanding (like moving heavy items), while women take up jobs which requires a great deal of patience (mixing of cement and water). It can be argued that it is because of the physical and emotional capabilitites that they tend to work out things this way.
There are tasks wh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a funny way" with adverb for "funny"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ights, equal fights'. Though meant in a funny way, this depicts one of the essential trut...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...c world looks at in the wrong angle. Id classify humans into three categories: ...
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Line 9, column 190, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...parameters as perceived by them. Taking a example of a building construction site...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, while, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 246.0 442.535393258 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05284552846 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97725317258 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658536585366 0.4932671777 134% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 704.065955056 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7963315775 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8666666667 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149736748827 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446307426934 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389763337382 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0627546387088 0.150359130593 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329140606967 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.