Men and women, like male and female of any other species, differ to some extent in their appearances and physical structure. However, these differences does not necessarily mean that either gender is more suited for some task and not suited for others. It is going too far to say that men and women are differently able to perform tasks based on inherent physical differences they own.
Different tasks require different abilities to perform and hence some people are more able to perfrom the task compared to others. However, this does not necessarily mean that the difference in abilities between gender is significantly higher than that within gender. This aspect should also be considered before making broad claim comparing men and women.
In the past, there used to be great differences between the roles men and women used to perform in and outside a family. However, after world war 2, this condition has altered significantly. Women empowerment movements such as WID, WAD and GESI have played crucial role in changing the perspective and roles played by women in socities. As a result, men and women are getting opportunities to get involved in every task from manual labor to science, technology and politics. Most importantly, women have proven themselves as equally competent as men in performing those tasks. Surprisingly, women are also excelling in tasks that require muscle power, which would otherwise considered as 'Not for women' type of work. Valentina tereskova is one of such example. she was first women astronut to reach the depth of space and reached earth. We have seen great scientists such as Marie curie, great warrior of that time 'Jhansi ki rani' who, although being female had shown great knowledge, skill and courage to achieve the pinnacle which was considered impossible even for men of that time.
It is true that women have to be involved in household and family tasks of production, reproduction and family management and hence are not being able to compete with mens in office. However, it does not mean that they are better at performing all these tasks and less able to perform some other tasks. The burden of reproduction certainly goes to female. However, plethora of tasks involved under family management can be passed on to men in order to make women free to work and compete with mens in office. This will not only make female equally competent at office, but also make men equally responsible for their home.
Of course, men and women have inherent physical differences between and among them, it implies that they have to be empowered and motivated to perform equal tasks for better upliftment of society. Yes, they are provided with variying capabilities, it does not necessarily mean that they are not equally suited for many tasks. There are not many reasons to quote this.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 761, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...ntina tereskova is one of such example. she was first women astronut to reach the d...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, of course, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2355.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 471.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59423831582 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475583864119 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 757.8 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2926775886 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.391304348 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4782608696 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69565217391 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284922275707 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843803215783 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557595677936 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17629753938 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450595211371 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 761, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...ntina tereskova is one of such example. she was first women astronut to reach the d...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, of course, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2355.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 471.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59423831582 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475583864119 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 757.8 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2926775886 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.391304348 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4782608696 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69565217391 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284922275707 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843803215783 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557595677936 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17629753938 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450595211371 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.