Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.”
Off course, I agree with the claim mentioned in the question. Like male and female of other species, men and women are complement of each other, designed to perfom activities, the other counterpart cann't efficiently perfom and thus forming a single unit, competent enough to achieve the goals.
First and foremost, men and women differ greatly in their body structure and capacity. These physical differences are visible in their capacities to do works. More musculine structure of men allows them to do the works that needs muscle and power. On the other hand, women are less musculine and can be less efficient in performing those tasks. This does not and should not mean that women are not as competent as male, it is just that they are competent to perform other tasks, that require other capacities. For example, women are provided with more emotional inclination that allows women to perfom activities requiring emotional activities.
Male and female are different in structure and function, even before they are born. Embryonic growth follows the directions as per genetic differences encoded in their chromosome. Different hormones, or similar hormone secreted in different amount results in this variation. During this phase, male and female embryo are formed differently attributable to testosterone and Mullerian Reduction factor present in male embryo and estrogen in female embryo. these chemicals have role not only in shaping body of embryo and fetus, but also determines formation and destroyal of different parts of vertebrate brain. Surge center present in female hypothalamus is one example. During and after this periiod, Vast amount of testosterone secreted by male gonads favors growth of better musculature compared to females, on whom estrogen promotes fat secretion and fatty body shape.
The author of the book "Men are from mars, women are from venus" claims that men and women are differently qualified and thus have to be behaved separately.
Yes, we can see women surgeons, pilots, austronauts, lawyers, politicians and even warriors, ricksaw drivers, construction workers, working among men and performing far better than men, and most importantly they are not exceptions. Among those sectors where females have to compete with men, the time duration required for pregnancy, childbirth and postpartum period have detrimental effect on women career and women have to be provided with special opportunities to make competing ground equal for both sexes.
From this discussion, we can conclude that though they are performing these activities, women and men are not equally suited for many tasks. and hence there should be clear distinction between works of men and women such that they can work together to achieve higher goals.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 455, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...e embryo and estrogen in female embryo. these chemicals have role not only in shaping...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 142, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
... are not equally suited for many tasks. and hence there should be clear distinction...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, thus, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2338.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 435.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37471264368 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7144509857 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 736.2 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1124169052 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.9 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183777923232 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617281652329 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447133981695 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105789781636 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340518200563 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 455, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...e embryo and estrogen in female embryo. these chemicals have role not only in shaping...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 142, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
... are not equally suited for many tasks. and hence there should be clear distinction...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, thus, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2338.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 435.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37471264368 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7144509857 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 736.2 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1124169052 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.9 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183777923232 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617281652329 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447133981695 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105789781636 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340518200563 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.