Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
It is a well-known fact that men and women have inherent physical differences. They are born with these differences. Their body structure and composition is different includinging hormone levels. Although present in both genders, the testosterone level is high in the male species whereas progesterone is high in the female species. This contributes for a large number of differences between the two genders. That being said, I disagree that this contrast affects the ability of either of them to complete many tasks.
One of the strongest reasons why men and women are equally suited for many tasks is the simple fact that everything we do in life if learnt over time. No one is born with a capability to achieve a task. Every thing is learnt and eventually mastered over time. It's a common misconception that women can cook in the kitchen and men cannot. Likewise, It's a norm that men are the only earning members of the family. Largely owing to the ancient times, it's just a tradition: women cook while men go out a earn. It has nothing to with the physical attributes or capabilities of either of them. It's not abnormal these days to see men and women both go to work and succesfully manage the household.
Physical differences are something that can be overcome. This proves the point that men and women are equally suited for a variety of tasks. Even though some differences may pose a barrier but it's not impossible to overcome them to emrge successful. Take for example the simple task of going to the gym and becoming strong. It's been said that women cannot gain muscles the same way men do because of their body. but there are multiple women out their in the world who are considered strong that countless men in the world. It take hard work and effort but it does not mean that she is incapable.
There exist many humans in the world who are born as men but identify as a woman and vice versa. These humans are called transgenders and they are strong proof that men and women are both equally suited for tasks despite their different bodies. They've shown throught history that they can live life and achieve daily tasks like a regular man/woman would.
That being said, I would also like to mention some strong points that compel one to agree with the statement. There are some inherent physical differences because of which mena dn women are not equally suited for many tasks. For example, A man cannot get pregnant. Only a woman's body can accomodate a child in her womb and this cannot be changed neither by science nor by magic. In conclusion, I would like to say that men and women are equally suited and capable of completing many tasks with the exception of a few special tasks that are naturally impossible for either one to do.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 355, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...he female species. This contributes for a large number of differences between the two genders. Th...
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Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...arnt and eventually mastered over time. Its a common misconception that women can c...
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Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...n the kitchen and men cannot. Likewise, Its a norm that men are the only earning me...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... tradition: women cook while men go out a earn. It has nothing to with the physic...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... tradition: women cook while men go out a earn. It has nothing to with the physical at...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
... same way men do because of their body. but there are multiple women out their in t...
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Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
...ong that countless men in the world. It take hard work and effort but it does not me...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: They've
...r tasks despite their different bodies. Theyve shown throught history that they can li...
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Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, may, so, well, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2274.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 485.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68865979381 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49762646387 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470103092784 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 723.6 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 6.24550561798 288% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9339448017 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.4137931034 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.724137931 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8275862069 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.83258426966 331% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305320964305 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081139107733 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721595956516 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18043720954 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498804704116 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.