Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Men and women are said to be god's best creations of this universe. Although both are said to be created as equally as possible, there are some inherent physical distinctions that set them apart and I agree with the statement that they are not equally suited for many tasks. However, this can also result from some nuanced reason like culture, environment and outlook and physical differences may not be the only prevalent one.
We need to look no further than our very own popular sports to justify the statement's veracity. Men are thought to be physically stronger than women and that allows them to go for sports that require vigorous stamina and tenacity like Football or Cricket or Rugby. That is not to say that women aren't suited for the tasks but to assert that men are generally more suited because of how their bodies are built. Many industries that require heavy physical labor usually choose men over women workers because of their physical capabilities. Some profession heaviliy favor females such as nursing and news reporting. Because of their physical capabilities where female bones are lighter and more flexible, they are suited for sports like gymnastics. thus there are numerous examples that set men and women apart in their workplaces because of their physical differences.
This inherent discrimination, however, can result from how humankind's outlook has changed in the last few centuries. It may very well be that females aren't less competent or suited than the males but they are just viewed that way by the society. Take the profession nursing for example; although both men and women can perform equally well in nursing once they've received proper training, there are far more women in the nursing profession than men. The reason this happens because, women, in the eyes of the society is thought as motherly, caring and attentive. Some people even think that nursing is humiliating for men because it means that they have more womenly feature and some think that men's honor is degraded when they go for a profession like nursing which is meant for women only. This narrow outlook has created what we call today gender discrimination and this is just one precedent why inherent physical differences aren't the only thing that is responsible for both men and women not going for certain tasks.
This is however not as apparent when it comes to the jobs that concern cerebral activities. In these cases, both men and women are though to be equally competent. many Engineering Universities have equal number of male and female students in each of their classes. Males as well females are also equally dominant in some of the popular sports such as tennis. The world's parochial view of the society is changing and nowadays we have both male and female teams for sports like football and cricket from a single country to represent them.
In conclusion, we might only need to change our outlook and see from a fresh point of view to determine that actually men and women are very much alike as god had created them to be.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, look, may, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2571.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 505.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09108910891 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81938755437 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465346534653 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 798.3 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.7000947762 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.428571429 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0476190476 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467554975544 0.243740707755 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140920647105 0.0831039109588 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114716688794 0.0758088955206 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243888485738 0.150359130593 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132420939625 0.0667264976115 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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