An individuals capability should never be restricted by his or her gender and it is going too far to say that men and women are not equally suited for many tasks because of inherent physical differences.
It is of utmost importance that women are treated equally to men. In the past, many people believed that most of the leadership roles were apt for men. However, these days many powerful nations such as England, India, Germany and so on have or has had women leaders. It is not valid to differentiate women from men based on physical differences. Although in the past there were many activities in which more of physical strength was required, those times have changed. With technological advancements, there is no task which now women cannot do. For example, before cars were invented, horses were the main source for travelling. In such situations, it was a little easier for men to travel cause as they had greater physical strength, they could control horses better. But now, as we have cars, both men and women can eually travel where ever they want, and that too independantly. In fields of education as well, women are no less than men. There are so many colleges and universities in which recently, the number of women are almost equal to men.
One field where the most physical strength is required is sports. Consider any sport, such as swimming, badminton, wrestling and so on have equal number of women participants as men. For many countries, the number of medals won by women are more than the men and as per latest reports, some sports such as gymnastics have women performing far better than men in national championships. Moreover, even popular soprts such as cricket and fotball have national championships in which women teams from various countries participate. Therefore, fields like sports which were highly domiated by men in the past now have equal participation of women.
Although, still there are some situations in which men play a significant role than women. One such case is the army of many countries. Still a large number of men are deployed in a countries national army. Also, fields in which there is not mauch technical advancements that favour women require women to struggle a lot especially when it is hampering their safety. Awareness about women equality is still not reaching many parts of the world in which many women still suffer. An example of this is some rural Indian villages where still practices such as child marriage of women are prevalent. However, tthe times are changeing and the message about women equality is spreading. More and more women are joining armies and many social eveils are being abolished by governments of various countries.
All in all, women must be treated equal to men and there should be no discrimination of women based on their physical differences from men.
- Colleges and universities should require all faculty to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the posit 66
- GRE Issue 39College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs. 50
- Colleges and universities should require all faculty to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the posit 50
- GRE Issue 39College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs. 50
- All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.Write a response in which you discu 66
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 19.5258426966 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2374.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 481.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93555093555 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66976895775 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476091476091 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 741.6 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0485966381 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3076923077 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 5.21951772744 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284156233507 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940884046289 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533004996812 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192392852285 0.150359130593 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301128036245 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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