"The most effective way to communicate an idea or value to large groups of people is through the use of images, not language."
Illustration is an effective way to introduce new idea among large groups of people rather than some boring statements.
People tend to be reluctant to accepting new ideas or values.But it is easier if they are presented new thoughts with visual presentation.Most of us don’t want to read or listen at a stretch.We feel bored.But we all adore arts . Arts can be thought provoking if they can be properly illustrated.A single image can express a lot of things at a time.So without being bored people can learn new things from them. On the other hand,attention grabbing is a very effective way to enter into people’s mind. Suppose, you are stuck at traffic and you saw an unique billboard ,you must turn around. Thus billboards play a great role in advertisements of products because these are eye catchy. Similarly attention grabbing images can leave a greater impact on people. That’s why images play a great role in introducing a new idea or value in larger portion of people. For example, when announcement is done on social awareness we rarely listen.But when we watch plays or any artworks on social awareness we give it more attention.
Sometimes images can be misguiding. If illustrations are ambiguous then conflicts can arise rapidly.As it is easier to grab attention through images, it can easily create riots too. We already saw many riots happened because of misinterpretation of movies. So immense caution has to be taken before spreading any new values through illustrations. Without considering all possible sides promoting an issue can be dangerous rather than fruitful.
Although there are some chances of spreading misinformations among people, we can’t deny the importance of thoughtful arts in shaping the mind of mass people. We can easily avoid the negativities and communicate a great new idea or value among larger group of people.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-08-09 | ishraqtashdid | 90 | view |
| 2020-08-09 | Nafisa Sadaf Prova | 50 | view |
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- It s dangerous to trust only intelligence 50
- Salicylates are members of the same chemical family as aspirin a medicine used to treat headaches Although many foods are naturally rich in salicylates for the past several decades food processing companies have also been adding salicylates to foods as pr 57
- Education should be equally devoted to enriching the personal lives of students and to training students to be productive workers 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, then, thus, as to, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 305.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12131147541 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05618287224 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1135596193 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.625 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206321328799 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072435837799 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791383788536 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153668990907 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909949029176 0.0667264976115 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.