A nation should require all of its student to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The topic raises the controversial question whether nation should mandate all of it student to study the same national curriculum untill they enter the college. Indisputably, different states of nation preverses different culture, religion beliefs, language and it's diversity which student needs to understand. Nevertheless, in the long run it's wise for a nation to have a same national curriculum in oder to promote sense of diversity, patriotism and unity among the society as a whole. Thus, I have a qualified support with the opinion that nation should require all of it's student to study same national curriculum until they enter college.
First of all, a same school curicullum teaches student the history of a nation, its diversity, beliefs and various political notions which might have developed in the country. The main purpose of school is to build same foundation skills - science, politics, arts, philosphy and music. This foundation can be molded further at the colledge level in pursuit of ambitions.
Futhermore, if every state matains it's own curriculum then it would create choas, political rift and sense of disunity among the people. For example, if seperate curriculum was allowed, then form political standpoint, all politicians would mold it to highlight its achievement rather than showing an objective view to thr citizens of the nations. This would further create rife and debacle among different same holding constrasing opinions among common folks. Moreover, this bias agenda would create a sense of aliniation and sense of forming different country as happend in the case of reift between Paakistan and India, an led to formation of seperate constitutional nation. Both form historical and poltical experience have told us to have a united curriculum rather than a seperate one.
Admittedly, one might argue that by having different curriculum one could better able to understant its society and promote its welfare. This is true, specially when it comes to understanding the history, culture, politics and language of a state. A states identiy would definately perish if people wouldn't know about its culture as people ought to live within same society.
In conclusion, although seperate curriculum helps in enlightment of a state's traditiona and get a chance to study its history with a aim to improve the economy of the nation, it would be reasonable for a nation to have a unified national curriculum to avoid conflicts and promote a sense of brotherhood amon people.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2124.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 399.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32330827068 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83525902697 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521303258145 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5094243572 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.75 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9375 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.482098182837 0.243740707755 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167707153062 0.0831039109588 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.216752431108 0.0758088955206 286% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263230066984 0.150359130593 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.23593613342 0.0667264976115 354% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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