A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The topic here suggests to have a standardized national curriculum for all the students of the nation untill college, which means till high school level. From my perspective, this might not be a very good idea and the reasons for which I think of this is given bellow.
First of all, every person is deifferent from others. They have different needs, thoughts, passions, values and most importantly, dreams. A standardized national education system will address all the children with same level and category of care and direct those children in the same path, which might not be a good idea for every child. Some might have potentiality in arts, music, paintings; while some others might have a great spark in astronomy, environmental science or even business strategies. Therefore, a standardized national education system will jeoperdise those children's dreams and potentialities. They might even do bad in the curriculum as they are not interested in the normal subjects like math, english, geography and also they won't have the option to choose there interest's subjects as there will be a standardized national curriculum so no extra subject to choose from.
Secondly, for making a standerdized national curriculum, the education commitee need to encorporate a lot of subjects keeping in mind of the variation of the students and social economic background, which might be a burden for the student and also might not be very helpful for their career. For example, if the country is an agricultural county, may be 60% of the area is filled with crop fields and other agricultural things. Now, if the education committee things the education system needs to focus on mainly agricultural studies for the development of the country, that might be very wrong because the other 40% of the area of the country might be totally urban area and the children there might never have to work in the crop fields. Therefore, the education they will get might be not usefull for them in most of the cases.
Form the reasons mentioned above, I think having a common national curriculum will not be a good idea. The curriculum should have some subjects common for all like maths, science, native language, english etc with the range of other subjects form where the students can choose according to their interests.
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- The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station."Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this time period, most of the 33
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggests having'.
Suggestion: suggests having
The topic here suggests to have a standardized national curriculum for ...
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Line 13, column 278, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to accord'.
Suggestion: to accord
...ects form where the students can choose according to their interests.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1935.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 382.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06544502618 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75475397166 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489528795812 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.3060784659 60.3974514979 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.214285714 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2857142857 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.21951772744 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213215624676 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839670900803 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843226821554 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15220682487 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534722571838 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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