In today's peaceful world illiteracy has no corner to hide and cannot cause silent destruction. Due to competition with and very few opportunities, Education has become the fundamental need of people. Education plays a vital role in developing one's personality. It not only enhance personality but also brings confidence and develop benevolence in oneself. How this Paramount Education should be provided is the biggest question as there are diverse regions in any country. Curricula should be the same at the national level or not is the biggest controversial topic. It can be clearly stated that all the students should study the same national curricula at a school level.
Firstly, School level education nurture the student to take his future path. As there are diverse schools at the national level and all schools have their specific board who design the courses. Consider the example, One student has passed the exam of one board and apply to another board for further study. Now-a-days all board has entrance exam based on the curricula in school previous year. If Other board, student do not have common curricula the competition is not fair. This might impede student to get higher and prestigious education.
Admittingly, Providing same curricula offer student flexibility of studying from anywhere in the nation. It is easy to get admission to any other school anywhere. For instance, Country like India if someone has to move to another state due to the parents then it is easy for the student to get admission in another state school. There is no need to start from scratch.
Importantly, All the students get the fair chance to learn. The Prestigious and costly schools cannot be affordable to the middle-class students. They get a fair chance to learn as other students. It is essential for any country to provide education to people in order to reduce the illiteracy and poverty. These impecunious students cannot afford this type of education and dwindle their chances to compete with other students. If all the school provide the same national curricula then competition is healthy. This will definitely produce well-educated students.
In the conclusion, Today's competitive world everyone wants to get a better education in order to compete with other students. But at the same time, poor people cannot afford private schooling. For providing healthy competition their base should be the same. And as school level curricula provide base it is necessary to study the same national curricula for all the students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Line 7, column 430, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...chances to compete with other students. If all the school provide the same nationa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, then, well, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2132.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18734793187 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76049048501 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45498783455 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 681.3 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1673886918 60.3974514979 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.1428571429 118.986275619 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6785714286 23.4991977007 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 5.21951772744 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209239802342 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658912591134 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842356844397 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133840180004 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293841421954 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 48.8420337079 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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