For uniquely identify anything one may require identity. word Identity has an obscure meaning among many people. For things, it is clear that some id rigidly assigned to it which can identify that thing.but for people it is always tedious task to define identity.some may define identity as how one is identified in society as totally solitary while some people define identity as existence in a social group. Although some may believe that for identification one may not require a social group, it is compulsory to have an identity in a social group when one is standing in front of other groups or outside world.one cannot be identified as an utterly independent person.
As a child born he is associated with family or last name. At a very nascent stage of life child's identity is influenced by family name. people who all have same last name fall under one family. One is always identified as someones relative and this identity is not solitary. One is defined among the group of people using relations in the family. For instance, brother is one typical example of identification among the social group rather independent identifies of that person.
Some people are gregarious in nature. They always ardently admired to meet new people. They always used to visit new places where people are completely new. In such a place totally independent identity will definitely not work. They only have some precarious insight into social groups. In such a place one has to identify oneself as a member of some organization or religious or social group. For instance, In USA Indian student is only recognized as Indian neither is recognized as an independent person having some identity. Citizen of USA always identifies that people as Indian.
Politics is also falling under the same category. Government is formed by party and leader is elected. Based on the party one may vote for candidate.means that political group also have an influence on independent existence of candidate. For instance, Two parties are competing for the ruling post and with positive influenced party's candidate may one regardless of its poor impact on people. Social group greatly influence one's identity in every aspect of life.
One can have its own independent identity but as presented above social group greatly influence the solitary identity. One may have its independent identity in confined society but when this circumscribed area is converted to the world then one can not have its own identify.she should identify via some group rather than by her name. It is unshakably agreeable that primarily identification should be done by social groups rather than independent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, while, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2229.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 436.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1123853211 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79518848291 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454128440367 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 769.5 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.6472665803 60.3974514979 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7307692308 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 5.21951772744 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 18.0 4.83258426966 372% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110666375952 0.243740707755 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034351500635 0.0831039109588 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377695366847 0.0758088955206 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706085417807 0.150359130593 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275803726734 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 48.8420337079 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.8971910112 134% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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