A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Widely observed dissimilarities and discremination has been discerned in college students and that is the result of different background and academics. Sometimes students have to suffer to adjust to common enivronment and to achieve cogency among the other students due to incompatibility of their existing abilities.
Issue, students of same nation shall be at same level of academics at the stage of entering the college, can not be supported totally since by doing so, nation can lost their cultural heritage and no student will have any understanding or interest in their culture as well as regional heridity. Respect and popularity can be lost and renowned culture can become obsolete in near future. In order to mitigate this issue, primary and secondary schools shall have one subject of regional language or culture which completely focus on developing and widespreading their culture through teaching literatures.
Rest of curriculum shall be unique throughout the nation in order to keep everyone on same scale. Such step helps in discouraging dissimilarities which is crucial probelm of society nowadays. Additionally, students can get cogency amongs the students which advocates their academic career in the college. Similarities while entering college boosts the confidence of students as all are on same platform and there is no any discremination based on their regional background.
Implementing such system throughout the nation can lead to many beneficial facts. Many common exams are conducted to evaluate the students for college admission though they have completed the same level of education but only because of differences between regional academics as they can not be evaluated until on the same level. Unique academics in all over the nation can help to eliminate such extra burden and evaluation and students can also focus in better way on thier centralized curriculum.
Though there may be diversity in the nation itslef, unique education system shall exist within nation that reflects a nation and their students as a unit when it comes to international level in field of education.
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- Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Provide a short update about your life since you saw him/her last - Explain why you will be traveling to his/her city- Say what you would like to do when you visit his/her city 78
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 417, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 331.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42598187311 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98095315732 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528700906344 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0266216821 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.153846154 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280815781932 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100991324476 0.0831039109588 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072382102948 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166139856614 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589364695957 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 48.8420337079 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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