A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
In order to let students pursue or find their own interests, I believe that the nation should not require all students to read the exact same course before university. Instead, they should design a basic course that everyone is necessary to study and an elective course that students can choose freely, for the following reasons.
In the era of the knowledge economy and rapid development of science and technology, if people can't study forever in their own professional fields, it is easy to fall into unemployment because they can't keep up with the fast-changing technology. The premise of lifelong learning is to be interested in specific fields and owning a motivation for continuous progression. Therefore, it is the core goal for the national education policy to let students pursue or find their interest in the school, and the appropriate elective courses are established for this purpose. For example, Finnish high schools allow students to freely arrange courses not only in their own school elective courses but also in some applied courses in vocational schools, and even studying in universities. Compared with students from other countries, Finnish students hate schooling at only 30%, while France is 75%. Therefore, students choose the curriculum from a wide range of elective courses to develop their interests, and they will continue to master their interests so as to be an expert in the future.
However, it does not mean that students can choose courses completely freely, even if in Finland there are two-thirds of the compulsory courses. Some basic courses still need to be nationally unified, because the lack of these courses will hinder students' lives. For example, sex education is one of the required courses in Finland. Few people say that they are interested in sex education and choose to take this course. However, the lack of knowledge in this course will increase the chances of getting students into trouble, such as teenage pregnancy. In addition, basic mathematics is also a required course in most countries. The lack of arithmetic ability puts students at risk because people cannot live without transactions, because it makes them more possible deceived in transactions. Therefore, completely freely choosing courses are likely to make students deliberately avoid certain classes, but the basic knowledge of those classes is very helpful to live.
Some may say that a very wide range of elective courses will increase the cost of national education, because each school needs lots of teacher with a different profession to sustain variety. Indeed, Finland also relies on high taxes to maintain this education system. Nevertheless, the lack of a good education system means that the country's future labor quality is also very poor. Without high-quality labor, the country will be in a disadvantage in the global competition, and the country's tax revenue will be reduced, leading to the collapse of the social welfare system. Therefore, education can be regarded as an investment in the future of the country. Investing a large amount of money with a good education policy can make the country strong for a long time.
In conclusion, the nation should set up enough basic courses to ensure that each student has the necessary knowledge of life, and simultaneously provide a wide range of elective courses for students to pursue or find their own interests, in order to give them the motivation to lifelong learning and the ability of living in the era of knowledge economy. The high education cost should not be the reason for preventing this policy. Without high-quality labor, the country will not continue to be strong.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, third, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 84.0 58.6224719101 143% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3081.0 2235.4752809 138% => OK
No of words: 594.0 442.535393258 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18686868687 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93681225224 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77265367605 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 215.323595506 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441077441077 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 972.0 704.065955056 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4605346755 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.24 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.76 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168662440259 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520095005231 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594112951928 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124230488364 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858903693899 0.0667264976115 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 100.480337079 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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