A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

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A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

The issue asserts that education up to qualification should unform throughout the country. I mostly disagree with the point, but there are some exceptions to it. my views and opinion are discussed further.

First and the foremost, by having common education curriculum until student enter's college would lead to the extinction of a regional culture. As it would not be possible to teach each and every culture of the country for a country like India. where each state has different types of culture itself. Also, the curriculum would be made keeping the country as a whole in the mind and it is not necessary that the body of people framing the curriculum have each and every culture of the country.

Furthermore, Framing a general curriculum could have ill-effects in terms of grasping capacity. For instance, In India, students from the urban part of the country usually are able to easily grasp the knowledge. On the contrary, students from the rural part of India usually have problems in grasping as the level of education is low in rural areas.

So, talking globally students would not be able to compete with the outside world as they would already be having problems in coping up with their studies.

On the contrary, having a unified curriculum would lead to the abolishment of various education boards. So, there would be equality among the students. As in the present case, the International Board Schools are too costly ad the one with large pockets can only afford such schools. This types of schools eventually lead to discrimination based on the class.

To sum up, In my opinion, there should be a standardized curriculum for the students but alongside students also be taught his/her culture like for students from West Bengal should be taught Bengali in their curriculum along with the standard curriculum.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Where
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Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are usually
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, for instance, in my opinion, on the contrary, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 305.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05245901639 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66279975835 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511475409836 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.9846259944 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3125 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137664848345 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409072333147 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046626533761 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0700485089031 0.150359130593 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417975190929 0.0667264976115 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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