we can definitie curriculum as the subjects that are included in a course of study or taught in a school. A nation is a country considered as a group of people with the same language, culture and history who live in a particular area under one government. Generally speaking, a nation should require all people to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. The reason why I support this argument is according to two ideas: Having the same level of basic knowledge is primordial reducing the parents' budget.
First of all, having the same level of basic knowledge is primordial for a nation and students. Students would take the same exam according to the same level of trainings giving by schools. Also, it will be easy to evaluate the performance of each students because the same national curriculum are given in all schools. Thus, governments will allow a good educational system and a performance in the schools. in other case, this system will be necessary for those who never go to the schools and also, advantageous for their future because their trainings are directly established by rules.
In addition to having the same knowledge, it will be useful to government to recruit the students who have had the same national curriculum to join army or public jobs. There will not have discrimination about students who have received the courses given or the aknowledge of everyone. Also, it will be helpful for parents because it would participate to reduce the parents' expenses on the purchase of books. For instance, they can have five childrens in differents classes and when one succeed for qnother class, he will help his sister with the books. In many cases, it will be more benefic.
However, even if a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum before to enrool college, it will be also good if there is differents subjects because in a country, we can have foreigns, who are not concerned about national curriculum because of their culture, historics. They will prefer to adapt their own subjects respect to their country or their tradional languages. For instance, there are ambassadors of each country located in a nation and sometimes, they do not speak the same language with population. We have the case of South Africa located in Benin and Benin is a french country, so it is better to adapt the culture of south africa for a particular schools.
Therefore, it is crucial for students to follow the same curriculum in a nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, first of all, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2088.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 426.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9014084507 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69937537827 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43661971831 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 672.3 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5155762139 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.894736842 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4210526316 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395170960634 0.243740707755 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140709336241 0.0831039109588 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.183321964362 0.0758088955206 242% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265034014346 0.150359130593 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114071872712 0.0667264976115 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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