No field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study

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... advances in knowledge require expertise from various fields. The world around us...
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... presents a seamless web of physical and anthropogenic forces, which interact in ...
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...n be understood only in the context of a variety of disciplines. Two examples tha...
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...his point involve the fields of cultural anthropology and astronomy. Consider ...
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...d astronomy. Consider how a cultural anthropologists knowledge about an ancient civilization...
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...owledge about an ancient civilization is enhanced not only by the expertise of th...
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...eologist--who unearths the evidence--but ultimately by the expertise of biochemis...
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...sts, linguists, and even astronomers. By analyzing the hair, nails, blood and bon...
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...mmified bodies, biochemists and forensic scientists can determine the life expect...
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...l well-being, and common causes of death of the population. These experts can als...
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...proper preservation of evidence found at the archeological site. A geologist can ...
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...the source and age of the materials used for tools, weapons, and structures--ther...
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... the anthropologist to extrapolate about the civilizations economy, trades and wo...
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...thropologist to extrapolate about the civilizations economy, trades and work habits, life s...
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...yles, extent of travel and mobility, and so forth. Linguists are needed to interp...
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...ics and extrapolate from found fragments of writings. And an astronomer can help ...
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...layout of an ancient city as well as the design, structure and position of monume...
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...and temples--since ancients often looked to the stars for guidance in building ci...
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...e in diverse fields is needed to advance knowledge involves the area of astronomy...
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...exploration. Significant advancements in our knowledge of the solar system and th...
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...erse require increasingly keen tools for observation and measurement. Telescope t...
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...hnology and the measurement of celestial distances, masses, volumes, and so forth...
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...ticated means of exploration. Manned and unmanned exploratory probes are designed...
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... by mechanical, electrical, and computer engineers. And to build and enable these...
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...ologies requires the acumen and savvy of business leaders, managers, and politici...
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... diplomats might play a role--insofar as major space projects require intemafiona...
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... efforts among the worlds scientists and governments. And ultimately it is our ph...
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...whose expertise helps provide meaning to what we learn about our universe. In ...
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...es in a vacuum. Because the sciences are inextricably related, to advance our kno...
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...e in any one area we must understand the interplay among them all. Moreover, it i...
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...scientists who make possible the science,and who bring meaning to what we learn from...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 14.8657303371 209% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2508.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 424.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91509433962 5.05705443957 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42213323908 2.79657885939 122% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589622641509 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 775.8 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 12.0 1.77640449438 676% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2991423608 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.4 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 33.0 4.97078651685 664% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 31.0 7.80617977528 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139934571441 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385828386297 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396381046217 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0283814718659 0.150359130593 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407282762564 0.0667264976115 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 14.1392134831 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 48.8420337079 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.06 12.1639044944 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.49 8.38706741573 125% => OK
difficult_words: 156.0 100.480337079 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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