Originality does not mean thinking something that was never thought before; it means putting
old ideas together in new ways.
Originality has a different meaning for everyone. It is something new, useful, and interesting. It
is a basis for many inventions. You cannot define originality in one word or one sentence. It can
be inventing new things, innovations or just putting old ideas together to invent something new.
Originality has very vast scope; you cannot bind it with few statements. It is related to creativity.
Originality is key to success in the new developing world. It is a key factor in almost every
sector. However, you cannot restrict originality with something, which no one has thought
before. It can be using good old ideas or part of old things to create a new thing or representing
old ideas in new frames. It can be good sometimes because this way you can restore old things.
Music industry is a good example of this. These days many artists are presenting old songs with
new music instruments and new videos. In a way, they are making new generation aware of the
old cultural and musical heritage.
The quantum theory is a good example of originality depending on the old and proven facts. The
basic of quantum mechanics is Newton's old mechanics and it is full of new ideas. The new
quantum mechanics has restored the old and valuable ideas of Newton's mechanics.
Sometimes, it is one's outlook, which gives birth to new ideas. Every individual has a different
way of looking at the things. For example, everybody knows the power of steam. However,
James Watt thought about using steam in a way that nobody had thought before and invented
steam engine. His thinking differently gave birth to a new invention. Sometimes, new ideas and
inventions have no strong base. They come out without any prior evidence or old ideas.
Similarly, the idea of internet did not spring out all of a sudden. It was inspired from ARPNET
that was initially used by the army.
However, there are arguments about the level of originality. What type of inspiration is
considered original? This is an important question as there is a very thin line between getting
inspired from somebody's work and using it to create a new thing and copying somebody else's
work. In fashion industry, old fashions and styles are coming back. New designers are inventing
new fusion dresses by combining old styles with new modern look.
Therefore, one has to look for old ideas to think creatively. One has to research the old data to
understand the demand, requirement, and the trend. Then only can one make a basis for his new
process of thoughts. The value of old ideas cannot be simply ignored.
Therefore, you cannot say that originality has to be something that was never thought before. It
can be a new angle to an existing thought. Originality can be stretched human knowledge, which
gives way to new inventions. One should have the freedom to take inspiration from existing
ideas or from Nature. Thus, one can take inspiration from old work but after giving respect to the
person behind the old ideas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2525.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 511.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94129158513 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75450408675 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68649290207 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46771037182 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 799.2 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 6.24550561798 320% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 41.0 20.2370786517 203% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3324216463 60.3974514979 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.5853658537 118.986275619 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.4634146341 23.4991977007 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.9512195122 5.21951772744 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 34.0 4.97078651685 684% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 7.80617977528 346% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 21.0 4.83258426966 435% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371212349952 0.243740707755 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813735370769 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611709035826 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916503569996 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616511311382 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 14.1392134831 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 48.8420337079 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.48 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 11.8971910112 34% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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