As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
The statement linking technology negatively impacting creativity of humans plays on recent humans. Surely the world has been changed dramatically
over past few years emerging the technology and finding the solutions to the regular human life problems. Quick look at how this happened over a
period of time, consider a man working in an IT firm, he will be dealing with computers and hardware machines in daily life. After going home,
he keeps in touch with family member wirelesslly using phone or internet. All of these think would have been unconviencible in 18th century.
but because of the gift of creativity that humans have we were able to achieve all the innovations.
The statement assumes that the use of the technology reduces the thinking ability in humans. Well, technology may be reducing the harwork
humans have to do to travel or to communicate but humans are curious creatures. Technology not neccessarily reduces the productivity of humans.
Infact it allows all human beings to live life more effeciantly. There are much more problems in the world which are still not answered.
Infact some of the problems have been introduces because of excessive use of technology like global worming, pollution. To reduce all of these problems
humans are working day and night. Use of technology while finding solutions to the global problems , reduces the hardwork that humans had to do
and provides multiple solutions much faster that humans can do.
In contrast to the statement, technology actually frees the human imagination. Consider the use of computers and internet specificcaly,
internet is used to share the ideas all over the world which leads to embracing the imagination power and thinking ability of readers.
In earlier centuries, it was impossible to deal with the diseases. But using the latest technology with the use of lazer treatments, humans
can be servied from life taking diseases. The research is still going on for the treatment of cancer with the use of latest technology.
Last example would be how technology provides the hope for humanity in future.By increasing the relience on technology impossible goals can be
achived now. Humans will be able to do things that seems to be impossible now. There is no limit for the problems in the world till the end of the era
and so the creativity and imagination of solutions to the problems by humans. Technology just help humans to achieve the those solutions much faster.
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- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. 50
- To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities. 50
- Originality does not mean thinking something that was never thought before; it means putting old ideas together in new ways. 50
- Originality does not mean thinking something that was never thought before; it means putting old ideas together in new ways. 58
- Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive because it is primarily in cities that a nation s cultural traditions are preserved and generated 75
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2078.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 404.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14356435644 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76684267376 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475247524752 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 660.6 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0390168879 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.347826087 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5652173913 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52173913043 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.97078651685 362% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222801212772 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698231092792 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414333067617 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755240277827 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389510361706 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.