As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate
The choice of taking help from the internet is not a bad thing,in fact, it is not uncommon in the concurrent world. The prompt recommended that ‘the people rely on the internet more often and they do not think themselves the problem arises even it leads deteriorate their ability to think’. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with this statement and argue that ‘rely on the internet will not deteriorate the think of people, rather increasing their knowledge when choosing internet for solving a problem and to think intensely‘ for two reasons.
To begin, the current communication through the internet increasingly intensified actually fiber communication around the globe. People communicating through the mobile phone or other internet-based devices and using social media or another online-based communication website. For instance, Computer programmer when faced a solve critical problem after trying several times if they didn’t get the solution then posted an online-based specific social media group or website, they get the idea to solve the problem from others expert in programming field. The above example illustrates that they maybe got the solution from other that doesn’t mean that their thinking is deteriorated even they can emphasize their knowledge in this field more frequently if they face difficulties later in that categorical problem.
Further, People thinking different way even everyone approach is so very different. They need to study to get successive a step,they need to know more and more in this competitive world. The world depends on technology it becomes digitized even further. Scientists are trying to discover a new planet for humanity. For instance, if a student wants to become a scientist, he or she needs to complete a plethora of steps to reach his or her destination. For knowing the steps he or she can engage the data to itinerate of his or her journey and he or she gets all the information surfing internet. The above example illustrates that if he or she needs to go proper institute to become a scientist, and all through idea he or she gets from using the technology.
Of course, some will argue that the advancement of technology will surely deteriorate people think. However, People learn using technology and helping each other also increasing their potentiality. Does learning something through technology will deteriorate people thinking ability?
The technology helping in every aspect of our lives and we know more, gain more and also think more even in a different way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ore, gain more and also think more even in a different way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, may, so, then, for instance, in fact, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2171.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 408.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32107843137 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97659939109 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504901960784 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3524395721 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.611111111 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325781266664 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10798499467 0.0831039109588 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10761800724 0.0758088955206 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207613241571 0.150359130593 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958938702214 0.0667264976115 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.