As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate
The author of the above statement claims that as people rely more and more on technology to solve their problems the ability to think for themselves surely deteriorates. I mostly disagree with the statement of the author.If we can answer the following questions then this will be more clear to us.
Have we solved all the problems that we face in everyday challenging world yet?I surely think that we can not solve all the problems in our life through technology.Moreover we face more and more new problems every days. By the development of technology we solve may problems but we face new ones for which we have to think deeply and have to research more abnd more.For example ,in the field of physics at 1900 century we made a great achievement and many said that physics solve all the problems and we need just to madyfied for the rest on.But now come to know about the term Dark matter and Dark enegy and alos know that we the human being only know anly about the 5% matter of the universe and in 5% our knowledge is also incomplete.By the development of technology we are trying to solve them but we face new restrictions in every aspects which need further research to think to solve.
Secondly,do the technology give every thinhs that we need?possibly not.We have to modify each and every technology for our bettemen.For example we can say about the computers.We know the computer is most probabiliy the best technology that the human achived. But since it is discovered human can not just sit down but every mpment it need to be modified more and more .Moreover now scientist are nor trynig to build the best ever computer called quantum computer which will add a great value to the field og technology.so if technology can do every problems we have not to work so hard to improve them.
Finally,Do not the rely on technology saves our valuable time?Yes ofcourse.The avdancement on technology saves our huge time by solving difficult problems in a very short period.For example the computer can now many problems that a human can need thousands of years.And thus rely on on computer saves more and more time to think about the other problems.
In conclusions we can say that technology make our lifes more flexible by solving problems though it some times pause human to think but it gives ue more time and more hepl to solve new ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 412.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71359223301 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66588731562 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441747572816 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 623.7 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 23.0359550562 221% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 161.68023998 60.3974514979 268% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 242.75 118.986275619 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.5 23.4991977007 219% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.375 5.21951772744 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36877227033 0.243740707755 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217679417229 0.0831039109588 262% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138359356787 0.0758088955206 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258295516145 0.150359130593 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.092546210677 0.0667264976115 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.5 14.1392134831 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 48.8420337079 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 12.1743820225 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.93 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.4 11.2143820225 200% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.7820224719 187% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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