As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. Do you agree or disagree with this.
In the prompt, it states that some people enjoy spending money on their dogs and that money could be better spent elsewhere. This is because if a person is able to meet their fundamental necessities, they are entitled to spend their money how they see fit. However, this essay does not promote the idea of conserving money rather than spending it on cats, dogs, etc.In the prompt, it states that some people enjoy spending money on their dogs and that money could be better spent elsewhere. This is because if a person is able to meet their fundamental necessities, they are entitled to spend their money how they see fit. However, this essay does not promote the idea of conserving money rather than spending it on cats, dogs, etc.
- Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain y 58
- Money on pet and money on them 70
- Imagine that you plan to donate money to charity to help people in need If you could give money to only one type of charitable organization which one of the following would you choose and why An organization that provides food and housing to people in nee 70
- Money on pet instead on them 70
- Some people spend money only in pet rather than spending on themselves 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...agree with this statement in the prompt.As people rely more on the internet it wil...
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...agree with this statement in the prompt.As people rely more on the internet it wil...
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...rnet it will help them in thinking more.In some cases, and some fields, people who...
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...ase a person s life and save their time.This would help them in making it easier and...
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...hich have the possibility in the future.It will give them the right direction.For ...
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...e.It will give them the right direction.For example, the black space , which planet...
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...t direction.For example, the black space , which planet has a chance of having lif...
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...ill keenly help them in the discovery of new things. Hence, it helps them towards...
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...a relation with the deterioration in the thinking ability of human beings. Howeve...
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...he creativity of a child. But, the child searches everything on the internet and ...
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...ything on the internet and searches for all of the answers. This is leading the child into...
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...s for help not to search for a shortcut.This will put a bad effect on the thinking s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, in most cases, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 58.6224719101 142% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2505.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 541.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6303142329 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82280071112 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58909474181 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.428835489834 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 766.8 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.0953232156 60.3974514979 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.913043478 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5217391304 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.39130434783 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268099288523 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710927835842 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811292597677 0.0758088955206 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160883723022 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223056585006 0.0667264976115 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 48.8420337079 133% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.