As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Technological improvement in day to day gives us an opoortunity to solve difficult problem easily.In my opinion, I mostly disagree with that technological advancement will deteriorate humans thougts with 3 reason.
Technologica advancement provide a number of opportunities to know the earth newly. Any one can find out his necessary information from goggle and other online library. In critical situation, we can use technology to operate airplane. In any risk position, we can use robot to operate the machine.For instance, nowadays, different kinds of fighter plan drived by robot. Air plane training program are operated by virtual reality. In medical sector, lots of intern doctor learn their opertional theory using virtual reality. This kinds of technological advancement smooth our journey as a human being.
Technological development affect our economy positively. It increases our production.Now we are able to produce ten times insted of traditional approach.It will ultimately grow our total production as a consequance our national income,saving and investment. For example, a garments factory install new eletric cloth swing machine,they are now produce more than tem time than traditional approach. As a result, the profit of that company will automatically up and gradully the income of the labor of that company will grow. They are well enough to survive and have amounts to save for unsure future.
On the other hand, today we are all depends on technology at any kinds of tiny task. At one time, we are calculate simple math practically instead of using calculator.But today we are used to calculator so highly. As a result, if anyone ask 10+10= ? , we are taking calculator at our hand and try to find out the solution. Due to technological advancement, we are highly depends on technology.
Though technology has merits and demerits. I think it merits are highly beneficil for human being rather than it's demerits. If we can use it properly, it will provide great advantages to us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 319.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31661442006 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13675763401 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.4932671777 126% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.665052854 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7619047619 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1904761905 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7619047619 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171277441852 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444097927745 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460073942957 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990669297254 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556878487847 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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