People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Taking risk is a part of life sometimes it might be lucrative or it might lead to debacle. Prompt suggest that people should undertake risky action after they have carefully considered its consequences. In my not so humble opinion, I agree with the statement that one should take risk by considering its consequences for following reason.
To begin with, taking risk plays very important role in achieving dreams and goal. Person who is ready to take risk knows that this risky action may exacerbate the scenario or it may foster it. Calculated risk is always better than directly jumping into action whose consequences are unknown. For instance, one can exemplify if person want to invest his/her money in real-estate than he/she should do the entire study current rate and feature rate of that place. If according to calculation, value of certain place in going to increase tremendously than it’s worth taking risky action by investing in that place but if we consider vice-versa scenario than taking risk may lead him/her in debacle.
Furthermore, if risk is related to life situation or if your own life is on the line then without considering all consequences may lead death. There are some situation in life where life in on line for someone else life and in that scenario if it is worth taking risk then you may have huge success. For instance, if we consider the job of fire-beggared or police officer then those people always put their life on the line to save others but while doing their job they always think about the probability of saving another life if they see probability high then they are ready to jump in the worst situation to save the life of other and it is quite blatant. On the other hand if probability of saving the person is near to zero than they don’t take risky action they will try from some other strategy.
Finally, there are many type of risk, some have fifty-fifty chance of winning and losing and some may have high chance of winning or losing. Before taking any risky action people should understand what they are losing, does it matter to their life? If, it affect major part of their life then person should carefully consider the consequences. For instance, some people like to gamble their winning probability is fifty-fifty but they are gambling their whole life earning then he/she must be ready to face worst and best scenario and if that person is gambling for little money which will not effect in any way whether he loses or wins then it is apt to take risky action.
In conclusion, taking risk is part of life, if you want to achieve your goals and dream than it is blatant that one should take risk. I bolster the statement that people should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'situations'?
Suggestion: situations
...equences may lead death. There are some situation in life where life in on line for someo...
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Line 7, column 20, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun type seems to be countable; consider using: 'many types'.
Suggestion: many types
...e other strategy. Finally, there are many type of risk, some have fifty-fifty chance o...
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Line 7, column 250, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e losing, does it matter to their life? If, it affect major part of their life the...
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Line 7, column 257, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
...g, does it matter to their life? If, it affect major part of their life then person sh...
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Line 7, column 595, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ambling for little money which will not effect in any way whether he loses or wins the...
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Line 7, column 675, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ns then it is apt to take risky action. In conclusion, taking risk is part of li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, if, may, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 33.0505617978 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2312.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 483.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7867494824 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47918346715 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.434782608696 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 738.0 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.6804727167 60.3974514979 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.444444444 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282617542545 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111569748438 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914310561662 0.0758088955206 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201817578025 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0987212048947 0.0667264976115 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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