There are basically two types of people, one who jumps head first into every thing they do and the others who carefully assess their situation and the outcomes of what they are about to do. This prompt suggests that while undertaking an action which could be ‘risky’ one should carefully evaluate its after effects. I agree with this recommendation as I agree with the saying ‘It’s better to be safe than sorry’.
To begin, an action can only be said to be risky once all of its consequences have been considered. For instance, if a biker decides not to wear a helmet while driving his bike, then he will understand that not wearing a helmet is dangerous once he considers the possibilities of getting in an accident. In this case if the biker didn’t think about the chance of getting in an accident and dying because he didn’t wear a helmet then how would he have determined that as an unsafe action.
Further, it is best to be ready for the worst. For instance, consider a man in his 30s with a wife and two children. If he is planning for a career change then he should completely think about all of the possible events which could happen during his career change. If his family was completely dependent on his earnings then he would have to consider how they would survive until he had a stable income in his new career. Else without proper planning his childrens tuition fee, house rent, and groceries would all be unaccounted for. If he would take all of these into consideration it would help him decide if the career change was worth it and in case something unfortunate happens he would have already planned for it.
To add, sometimes all risky actions may not be worth it. For example, if one wants to buy an expensive car to show off to their neighbors, costlier than she can afford. Buying this car would require her to take a loan from the bank. Here if she thought about her decision she would understand the car isnt worth putting a hole in her bank account just for improving her social stature.
In contrast, one may argue that if we keep on thinking about stuff then we may never be able to take risks or we may lose the opportunity. But if one is able to assess their situation then they would also know what types of risks they can afford to take and act accordingly.
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- People should undertake risky actions only after they have carefully considered its consequences Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take I 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: it's; it is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, may, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 33.0505617978 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 418.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54306220096 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46821788743 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502392344498 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0555227601 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160702783143 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605100575222 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487806847692 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915767736041 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536015320308 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 48.8420337079 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.