People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Life is a full of risks. People driving a car, flying with an airplane, or taking a subway train, Each has risk associated with it. People apply for a job, go to gym, use a computer also has a somewhat risk reason. People's lives are full of risk. Everyone takes a risk on daily basis. Most of the risk people take on daily basis are aware of the consequences it has. Daily risks may be not bigger than some other risk like landing on the moon or the mars. Risk factor is plays an important role in any decision people make. However, some risks are bigger than others and people should consider all risk factors so that they can make better decision in any condition. People should undertake all risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Firstly, people are aware of risks associated with daily commute. People know the risk of driving with car or flying with a airplane. They take that risk and that's what makes people go forward. This is very common way of taking account of risk factor. Even though flying form a aeroplane has more risk factor as there is no way one can survive after plan crash compared to a car crash. All these factors are plays role in a people's lives. People know what will happen after they travel with car. Everyone has carefully considered a risk it has.
Secondly, Other daily examples like stock market. People who invest into stock should know all the risk has and should ready to face consequences. People can get more money or lose all the money. So people should fully consider the risk and only then start investing a stock market. People gamble money in casinos. People can lose money like stock market. People who gamble should consider its risk and further consequences like addiction, money loss. Every event has a risk and people should always consider it. If people considers all the risks and it's consequences then people be able to make better decision for themselves, Wheter it to invest in stock or gamble. After considering these factors people can only gamble or invest certain amounts of money and save other for the better future. So even after loss in gambling they can rely on the saved money. It is far better choice than losing all the money. In this people considered all the risk and made better decision.
Some risky action like landing on the moon or mars has many factors and consequences. First of all it people have invested so much time and money into exploring new thing despite of the all the unknown risks. It has so many unknown risk factors. NASA or other space agencies take these risk factor under consideration and make action based on that. They know if anything fails then all money and time invested is down the drain. However, It can be a learning experiment for the future.
Some people may think about risk too much such that they will have sever anxiety and performance issues. In that case people should try to avoid taking risk in the account or let other people deal with the risk factor. Many youngsters have these anxiety issues as they are not ready to deal with consequences or they don't know how to deal with it. This is an important issue and people should really think about before taking an action.
In conclusion, People should really consider consequences of risky actions they take. It helps to make better decisions, better judgement for the future. However, risk factors may downplay some people's potential or create severe anxiety hence such people should consider alternatives to deal with consequences. This will help everyone in the long run.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 192, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('somewhat') instead an adjective, or a noun ('risk') instead of another adjective.
...job, go to gym, use a computer also has a somewhat risk reason. Peoples lives are full of risk....
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...refully considered its consequences. Firstly, people are aware of risks assoc...
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Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...risk of driving with car or flying with a airplane. They take that risk and thats...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ith a airplane. They take that risk and thats what makes people go forward. This is v...
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Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...of risk factor. Even though flying form a aeroplane has more risk factor as there...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... carefully considered a risk it has. Secondly, Other daily examples like stoc...
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Line 5, column 360, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eople can lose money like stock market. People who gamble should consider its risk and...
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Line 5, column 800, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[5]
Message: “So even after” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y and save other for the better future. So even after loss in gambling they can rely on the saved money. It is far better choice than losing all...
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Line 5, column 919, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...er choice than losing all the money. In this people considered all the risk and made...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...all the risk and made better decision. Some risky action like landing on the mo...
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Line 6, column 105, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'peoples'?
Suggestion: peoples
...ctors and consequences. First of all it people have invested so much time and money in...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a learning experiment for the future. Some people may think about risk too muc...
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Line 7, column 320, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ready to deal with consequences or they dont know how to deal with it. This is an im...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...think about before taking an action. In conclusion, People should really cons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2956.0 2235.4752809 132% => OK
No of words: 625.0 442.535393258 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7296 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.0 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28464089082 2.79657885939 82% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.376 0.4932671777 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 921.6 704.065955056 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 45.0 20.2370786517 222% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7796052137 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.6888888889 118.986275619 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.8888888889 23.4991977007 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 29.0 5.13820224719 564% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208232653155 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709540009776 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673336331254 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143217062468 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369356163522 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 14.1392134831 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 8.38706741573 81% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.