People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Every action has an equal and opposite reaction, are famous words of Sir Issac Newton. These words have use not only in physics, but also in our mundane lives. For all quotidian tasks we do there is an consequence we have to face which may have a positive or negative effect. I support the what the prompt is trying to imply, following are the reasons backing up my support for the statement.
Doing things precipitiously and carelessly most often leads to failure and msiery, even when the intention of the doer is positive and in good will. For instance, when someone sees a drowning man he may jump into the turbulent water instinctively to provide help even when he can't swim, putting his own life is danger aswell. This risky action intended to save a life can in turn cost him his own. If he thought and tried to throw a floating object near the man he could have done the same thing or could have contacted someone who could provide help like a lifeguard or another bystander who didn't notice the drowning man. This clearly shows if the person thinks deliberately before acting he can be more effective in the task and the ill consequences can be mitigated to large extent.
Thinking before taking action makes a cautious, which can bear many fruits in various situations - assuiming, a person who works invests in stocks carefully thinks and studies the trends of a sector and stock before investing and it bears his great returns in the future compared to someone who invests on the brand and face value of the stock. Investing without thinking will only lead to a loss as the prices plummet and make the compant insolvent. A good study and thinnking about the outcomes helps making a learneed decision and ensures highest chacne of success with minimal ill consequences. So, it is always advisable to think before leaping into something.
Sometimes, people may not think of the consequences and leap in action due to intensity of the situation, for example, supporters in a intense game of basketball may leap into a fist fight if intsigated by supporters of the opposing team which can lead to mass scale violence in to arena between the two sects present. This results in damage to everyone present if the person who started the brawl just thought about his actions and everything that might ensure late he could have prevented it.
For the following reason one can easily say it is better to first carefully think about the consequences then take the appropriate actions so as ti minimize harmful effects and maximize efficacy of the intended action.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... For all quotidian tasks we do there is an consequence we have to face which may h...
^^
Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...tinctively to provide help even when he cant swim, putting his own life is danger as...
^^^^
Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'cants'.
Suggestion: cants
...tinctively to provide help even when he cant swim, putting his own life is danger as...
^^^^
Line 3, column 594, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ke a lifeguard or another bystander who didnt notice the drowning man. This clearly s...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 504, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to make' or 'make'.
Suggestion: to make; make
... and thinnking about the outcomes helps making a learneed decision and ensures highest...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 573, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d ensures highest chacne of success with minimal ill consequences. So, it is alwa...
^^
Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e situation, for example, supporters in a intense game of basketball may leap int...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2130.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 445.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78651685393 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54018360112 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577528089888 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.6733140124 60.3974514979 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.125 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8125 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148896180748 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472732430694 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371774921338 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911261725608 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342541136097 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.