To some extent, I agree with the argument that people should take some risky action after taking its consequences into consideration. However, the arguer extends the opinion into an extreme which cannot be reversed while overlooks and leaves no room for other exceptional circumstances. On balance, my points of view and deep analysis are as follows.
Certainly, it is beneficial to be prescient and consider potential consequences before taking some risky ideas into implementation, from which we can avoids risk or put the risk level into the lowest one. Given that we all have limited energy and resources, we have to circumvent unnecessary risks to maximize our benefits. Companies would bypass the risk into bankruptcy if they took risk analysis before deciding to invest in a risky project, and students would not be regret if they considered the consequences for not studying hard.
However, it does not mean we should always carefully consider consequences, of which the results would not be satisfying. If companies are addicted to hesitate to make decisions, then there is a risk of missing opportunities and losing potential market share. We all know that innovative products have huge potential risks and benefits at the same time, and companies should decisively implement strategies with the fleeting opportunity. And students may miss the opportunity to study in a prestigious university if they are too afraid of possible failure of the admission examination, in which considering nothing may be the best choice.
Therefore, the need to consider consequence depends on the specific circumstance. Crudeness and deliberation have their own advantages and disadvantages, and we should reflect on ourselves in accordance with our past experience. If we are too timid to pursue our goals, we should undertake risky action as long as we have the idea, given that it is very precise for we coward individuals to generate an adventurous idea. And vice versa.
In conclusion, it is not reasonable to deny that considering consequences is conducive before taking risky behaviors under some circumstances, while it is also harmful in some special conditions.
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- People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences 66
- Some people want government to spend money on searching for life on other planets However others think it is a waste of public money when the earth has so many problems Discuss these two views and give your own opinion 73
- Some people want government to spend money on searching for life on other planets However others think it is a waste of public money when the earth has so many problems Discuss these two views and give your own opinion 78
- Some people want government to spend money on searching for life on other planets However others think it is a waste of public money when the earth has so many problems Discuss these two views and give your own opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'avoid'
Suggestion: avoid
... into implementation, from which we can avoids risk or put the risk level into the low...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...quences, of which the results would not be satisfying. If companies are addicted to hesitate ...
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Line 5, column 549, Rule ID: AFRAID_OF_HEIGHT[2]
Message: The noun should be probably in the plural form: 'failures'.
Suggestion: failures
...sity if they are too afraid of possible failure of the admission examination, in which ...
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Line 7, column 213, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...ect on ourselves in accordance with our past experience. If we are too timid to pursue our goal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 343.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34402332362 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09691261593 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556851311953 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2919523982 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.2 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284267794307 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832987062184 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703996265527 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142693181259 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282788610924 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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