people who are the most deeply committed to an idea or policy are the most critical of it.
The statement claims that the people who are deeply commited to and idea and policy they are most critical one. Yes i agree with the claim. the most of the people who are commited deeply they are most unchangeable to any reason or decision.
Firstly the reason is that the people who are very firm and strong about there decision they are deep rooted about what he says is always true even if theory chasnged they donot change due to this if the principle of law get changed they donot change they stand about what they says due to this they are the most critical one and due to this they get more and more confined about their deecision.
secondly the reason is this type of people get too much angry when their belief or idea commited gets wrong and due to this they get more and more deep rooted and they want to be and by increasing their age they feel lonely and think averyone is wrong arround us and we are only true and due to this they get more and more tense and that cause the adverse effects on their health .So due to this this are the most critical problem to be handle .
Thirdly the reason is there is more and more deeply commited people get form and by seeing this people the people who are not deeply commited also get deeeply commited and due to this this problem goes on increases and it is very difficult to handle this problem.For example the mom or dad or any one who is deeply commited to the ideas they get strongly argue their child and force to believe that type of belief only .Eventhough that belief get changed in modern time and that belief is true only at ancient times So telling them that the belief is changed is the most critical task to handle.
In sum we conclude that the people who are deeply rooted or commited to the ideas or policly are the most critical thing to be handle there might be there could be moderately ask them to change their belief depending on the type of different perspectives.Nevertheless people who are deeply commited are most critical things to handle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 374.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42780748663 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26494051921 2.79657885939 81% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.366310160428 0.4932671777 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 23.0359550562 230% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 195.471173301 60.3974514979 324% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 236.571428571 118.986275619 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 53.4285714286 23.4991977007 227% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.7142857143 5.21951772744 244% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326624874692 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.262994288987 0.0831039109588 316% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.20403840513 0.0758088955206 269% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274002044491 0.150359130593 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.186074443684 0.0667264976115 279% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.2 14.1392134831 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 48.8420337079 71% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 12.1743820225 177% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.3 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 100.480337079 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 11.2143820225 207% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 11.7820224719 187% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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