People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Logical thinking in the process of decision making is the basic criteria, as one has to circumspect the cause and effect .The decisions based on emotions are ephemeral ones,later while reanalyzing it might become a disaster in nontrivial circumstances. Though we would emphasis on the age old saying of “A coin has two sides”, a decision dependent on emotions is most of the time a catastrophe, especially when one takes a great leap.
Decision makers of firms are to make decisions by using their logical thinking and not by their emotions.For example the firm is facing a recession period and has to fire some of its employees,in such situations the CEO has to remove them from their job.In order to take such a decision the CEO has to deploy his practical thinking rather than his emotions.
Additionally, emotional decisions are deleterious ,this would hold true for a prisoner accused for his wrong doing such as a murder,terrorism.A perfect example that fits in the case would be terrorists. Coming across the backdrops of many terrorists, we could find that it would have been an emotional decision to join the gang.At this stage a person’s life will definitely be at stake and justifying logically would not bring a dead man alive.
On the other hand, as the future is unforeseeable, emotional decisions would at times be though not the best decision, at least would be an apt one. For instances lets analyse a situation of a ambitious business personnel who is made fun of for his obesity, it would be a correct decision to get a membership from a gym or to buy gym gadgets.If he is unable to get the desired result then the though not deleterious at least it would have been a waste of money. On the contrary if was so desperate to reduce his weight then decision taken by him at that moment in spite of being emotional, is in fact the correct decision taken by him.
Thus as a conclusion, it can be stated that emotional decision, though seem correct at that instant of time, will become harmful in certain extreme conditions.
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Discourse Markers used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230769230769 0.240241500013 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.148717948718 0.157235817809 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.115384615385 0.0880659088768 131% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0358974358974 0.0497285424764 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0512820512821 0.0444667217837 115% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133333333333 0.12292977631 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0358974358974 0.0406280797675 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.89541840303 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0282051282051 0.030933414821 91% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.110256410256 0.0997080785238 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0358974358974 0.0249443105267 144% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00769230769231 0.0148568991511 52% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2123.0 2732.02544248 78% => OK
No of words: 355.0 452.878318584 78% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.98028169014 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.318309859155 0.366273622748 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.242253521127 0.280924506359 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.191549295775 0.200843997647 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138028169014 0.132149295362 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89541840303 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 219.290929204 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543661971831 0.48968727796 111% => OK
Word variations: 59.4683276019 55.4138127331 107% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6194690265 44% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 39.4444444444 23.380412469 169% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6435829993 59.4972553346 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 235.888888889 141.124799967 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.4444444444 23.380412469 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55555555556 0.674092028746 231% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.21349557522 384% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 63.6697965571 51.4728631049 124% => OK
Elegance: 1.69565217391 1.64882698954 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120068787235 0.391690518653 31% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.173811655124 0.123202303941 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0404057428259 0.077325440228 52% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.763589284126 0.547984918172 139% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141055964114 0.149214159877 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633531076358 0.161403998019 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338845559947 0.0892212321368 38% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.269636693769 0.385218514788 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0798032270373 0.0692045440612 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757955828705 0.275328986314 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342109462375 0.0653680567796 52% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 13.5995575221 66% => OK
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6