There are vairous examples of people who have created a legacy where they have ignored all the backgorund noise around them.But everyone who ignores doubts or criticism won't nesscarry leave a legacy or in context be successful in their perpesptive life.I partially agree with the title.
As we always hear stories about people who are successful through hard work and consistency like Lebron James,Cristiano Ronaldo,Elon Musk and many more.But there must be a sense of maturity about when to listen to criticism and when to leave.A prime example is Harshad Mehta a stock trader in India.Harshad was a fearless and risk taking trader.During the years 1992 to 2000 he became one of most richest person in India through trading and acquiring vairous bussinesses.But a rift with Ajay Kediya another mainstream trader lost all of his wealth and got stuck in a scam.Resulting in losing all of his wealth and going into the prision.During his rift with Ajay Kediya,his subordinates warned him about Ajay Kediya and connections to the government.But due to his ego he still went toe-to-toe against Ajay Kediya.Sometimes listening to cristicism helps in improve and upskill yourself.
Flip side to this is Cristiano Ronaldo.A top footballer always improving and always scoring goals in crucial moment.In one of his interviews he said that he does not read the news or rather consume any information about him.It adds a unnesscarry barrier or pressure in his head.He further added that the media companies are doing it for the sake of the views and money.In his case Ronaldo is not bothered by cristicim or doubts thrown at him by other people.A person can perform a task where he is stress free or rather not having any second thougths.A person who is bothered by doubts or criticism does not performs 100%.
Legacy is something people remember or look-up to.In case of Harshad Mehta people look at it as egoistic person or a series of mistakes that Harshad has done.A small child will look up to a person like Cristiano Ronaldo rather than Harshad Mehta.So,at the end all I think is people who are not bothered by doubts or criticism are not always bound to leave a legacy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, second, so, still, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 364.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97527472527 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83802112489 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 91.0 23.0359550562 395% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 235.36182252 60.3974514979 390% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 452.75 118.986275619 381% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 91.0 23.4991977007 387% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.25 5.21951772744 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 7.80617977528 384% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235219149083 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156450676854 0.0831039109588 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785464896201 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156450676854 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785464896201 0.0667264976115 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 47.5 14.1392134831 336% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -12.43 48.8420337079 -25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 37.6 12.1743820225 309% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.79 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.88 8.38706741573 142% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.8971910112 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 38.4 11.2143820225 342% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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